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chapter 1

The next second, a continuous stream of messages popped up on the cell phone ‘s screen.

(phone's ......instead of phone ‘s)

The next second, a continuous stream of messages popped up on the cell phone's screen.

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So, he asked him directly whether he possessed anything human’s items.

So, he asked him directly whether he possessed any human’s items.

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"Third brother! come over here! The forum has been flooded by another news! Zhang screamed.

"Third brother! Come over here! The forum has been flooded by another news!" Zhang screamed.

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"What the hell! Asshole! Confess now! What’s your relationship with our goddess. Zhou and Zhang stood up and walked towards him with their fists ready.

"What the hell! Asshole! Confess now! What’s your relationship with our goddess?" Zhou and Zhang stood up and walked towards him with their fists ready.

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"Third brother. When did you learn how to brag so well? Zhou rolled his eyes.

"Third brother. When did you learn how to brag so well?" Zhou rolled his eyes.

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"Aren’t you a third generation farmer? Where did you get the gold? Zhang asked curiously.

"Aren’t you a third generation farmer? Where did you get the gold?" Zhang asked curiously.

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Well, all the jewelry shops will always interested in purchasing gold.

Well, all the jewelry shops are always interested in purchasing gold.

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"Stop! You are not allowed to enter this shop!" The guard said it in a deep voice.

"Stop! You are not allowed to enter this shop!" The guard said in a deep voice.

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This was a small world for these two enemies to meet at the same place,

(period not comma at the end of the sentence)

This was a small world for these two enemies to meet at the same place.

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"Again, you have eaten shit before.

"Again, you have eaten shit before."

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You had puked shit before, You even poured it all over Bing’s face.

(period at the end of the sentence...not comma)

You had puked shit before. You even poured it all over Bing’s face.

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Obviously, he was Shi’ father.

Obviously, he was Shi's father.

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Dad! We can’t but these ingots!

Dad! We can’t buy these ingots!

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What that shocked Chen even more was the fact that this old man was serving Lan’s family

What shocked Chen even more was the fact that this old man was serving Lan’s family

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She had ever seen Uncle Qin unnerved in any sort of manner.

(never seen)

She had never seen Uncle Qin unnerved in any sort of manner.

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By now knowing the true value of those ingots, he realized that he had lost five million and seven hundred thousand Yuan.

By not knowing the true value of those ingots, he realized that he had lost five million and seven hundred thousand Yuan.

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After that, Chen and Bing went back to school. Conveniently, Chen had the chance to ride with Lan in her Roils Royce.

(Chen and Lan....not Chen and Bing)
(Rolls Royce .....not Roils Royce)

After that, Chen and Lan went back to school. Conveniently, Chen had the chance to ride with Lan in her Rolls Royce.

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However, the design of jewelries nowadays is just too much. That was why I couldn’t seem to find any one that she would like."

(anything since it's an object not a person)

However, the design of jewelries nowadays is just too much. That was why I couldn’t seem to find anything that she would like."

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He kept the rest of the hairpins, carefully inside his bag.

He kept the rest of the hairpins carefully inside his bag.