Great translation / editing quality since very few mistakes...
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Boss Afei adjusted the number of bear paws to ten, but he couldn’t bear to click. This was one million yuan!
(ten thousand instead of one million since one bear paw = 1000 yuan)
Boss Afei adjusted the number of bear paws to ten, but he couldn’t bear to click. This was ten thousand yuan!
54
Haixing also followed purely out of curiosity.
Galaxy also followed purely out of curiosity.
(there is no Haixing in the novel....so most likely Galaxy since it's the only other cat)
59
He thought about this event with the mind of a successful businessman, and immediately sorted out inhis mind.
He thought about this event with the mind of a successful businessman, and immediately sorted out in his mind.
(in his)
64
He released Xinghai and Fina to the empty space in the store.
(change Xinghai to Galaxy)
Xinghai tilted her head, wiggled her ears and found that she was in a familiar environment.
(change Xinghai to Galaxy)
64
"Well, it is yours. Open it. Xinghai, let’s play hide-and-seek," he said to Xinghai, closed the store and stroked the cat bell.
(change Xinghai to Galaxy)
65
It would be very convenient if there were on bicycle, but in this lousy school, as long as it had two wheels, then it would usually be stolen in one night.
(they were on bicycle)
It would be very convenient if they were on bicycle, but in this lousy school, as long as it had two wheels, then it would usually be stolen in one night.
80
"Take thisis trash out."
"Take this trash out."
81
Not a bear paw that was worth one thousand dollars, nor a big hairy crab worth one hundred dollars, but a piece of five-kernel mooncake that was worth five dollars—and it was only one f*cking piece! After dividing with the live broadcasting platform, Snowy could only receive two dollars and fifty cents!
(please change dollars to yuan since dollars might confused some readers into thinking US dollars.
The currency in the novel is in yuan so please use yuan)
81
Having put chatting and laughing aside, Zhang Zian didn’t want to neglect the few other guests. She turned towards Xiao Yan and the others and greeted, "You guys also came with Snowy? What do you guys want to look at?"
(He turned....not She turned)
Having put chatting and laughing aside, Zhang Zian didn’t want to neglect the few other guests. He turned towards Xiao Yan and the others and greeted, "You guys also came with Snowy? What do you guys want to look at?"
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It wouldn’t do to just rely on the washing; cats didn’t need to be washed so often, and he also knew that the fixed price of three hundred dollars each time was a bit expensive.
(change dollars to yuan please)
93
Sun Yinian Opened up his eyes, was about to defend himself and sighed, "you know what that guy said?
(opened)
Sun Yinian opened up his eyes, was about to defend himself and sighed, "you know what that guy said?
94
"Good morning, Uncle Niu!" she didn’t talk much, locked her car and walked in her clinic.
"Good morning, Uncle Niu!" She didn’t talk much, locked her car and walked in her clinic.
97
Behind the counter stood a lady in her 30swearing a traditional Chinese Qipao.
Behind the counter stood a lady in her 30s wearing a traditional Chinese Qipao.
98
Schrodinger’s quantum cat – Xinghai, was a pure spiritual Elfin that didn’t belong to any breed.
(change Xinghai to Galaxy please)
98
Some viewer suggested, "Snowy, have Mr. Manager look at the mane. Don’t forget to point your camera at him. Can’t wait to see his reactions!"
(change mane to menu)
99
After letting out his anger, Jiang Tianda fixed his suite and said seriously, "Please get me a new monitor."
(fixed his suit)
104
I think that was not a modern Egyptian ca,t but an ancient cat, a real, purebred Egyptian cat."
(cat instead of ca,t)
104
Zhang Zian released Xinghai and Fina, and then clicked on the benevolent and righteous cat in the pet bar.
(Xinghai to Galaxy for consistency purpose)
He could only unlock her real name through increasing her friendliness, just like how he unlocked Xinghai and Fina’s real names.
(Galaxy instead of Xinghai)
104
Apparently, the benevolent and righteous cat was a real cat, not like Xinghai who was only an imaginary elfin.
(change Xinghai to Galaxy)
