See this is one of my favorite insert I did for my chapter and I got a comment on it but you're talking about this right?
"Feed me. With the way it smells right now I can guarantee you I will not stop at just one." with that comment Eli leaned in closer, closed his eyes and opened his mouth. Olivia blushed a bright red as she looked at the waiting Eli and then to the meatballs. She took a big gulp before puncturing one of the meatballs with the fork. She trembled slightly as she moved the meatball from the container and towards Eli's mouth. Once Eli felt the sauce on his tongue he chomped the meatball off the fork and straighten his back. Olivia quickly closed the lid on the container and placed it back into her bag.

She nervously looked at Eli as he savored each bite. Once he swallowed she stared at him with anticipation. "That was so good!" Eli proclaimed "I am so glad I got you to feed me or else I would have ran off with your container!"

"You were going to steal our food!" Blair shouted as the whole gang started walking towards them. Olivia was mortified she wasn't sure what the saw or heard but she knew for sure they heard something. She quickly got up to her feet "Wow everyone is here! Oh my gosh I forgot to bring drinks! Since there is a lot of us I'm gonna run to the vending machines and bring back drinks! Ok, ok, ok be right back!" and with that Olivia ran like the wind.

Myriad_ I was waiting for my leads to legally turn 18 before I went into the nitty gritty before hot scenes! But yes definitely hot scenes hands down.

    But see the problem with Harems is people can end up like the other person more then the intended and it just makes thing disappointing especially when the lead doesn't choose and stays with everyone. It just screams polyamorous.

      Scarlettbunny Doesn't choose? That mostly in female reverse harem. In male harem, the MC always choose everyone. Chinese Webnovel male is more alpha than Japanese manga MC.

      That is the different romance.

      Woman want to be chased... by the super charming prince(S) (in my sense border rapist).

      While men wants More.

      This is just self-satisfaction that real life couldn't give.

          MasterRabbink manga why?!?! I loved you so deeply! So basically you're saying that guys want to self indulge, no restrictions what so every but girl mc are more decisive ugh harems though I will think about it.

              MasterRabbink I have complied! I will do one as a bonus chapter if I get comments or reviews. My eyes have been opened!

                  Nikideema Yes! This Rabbink actually interested what women like and dislike from a romance.

                  I think what I get from a female romance novel

                  • Male lead must be genius.
                  • Male lead must be SUPER handsome
                  • Male lead must be single and LOYAL (Except in the royal harem story. However, No. Single King or Prince is even better).
                  • Male lead must have the boss job. (CEO, King, Professional, Super Cultivator) (Prince = Future King).
                  • Male lead must be POSSESSIVE. (love too much until he couldn't live without the female MC).
                  • Male lead must show some 'JEALOUSY', it is cute.
                  • Male lead must prepare to lost EVERYTHING for MC. (Abandoned throne, company, etc) to protect the MC. This made the male lead sweet.
                  • Male lead must be AGGRESSIVE. Try to kiss or forced himself to enter the female MC. Female MC often pretend that she didn't like. (Border Rape.) (Are you serious girls? Or is it this Rabbink's wrong?).
                  • Supporting Male Character must be Sweet, Kind, another genius but less than the Male Lead. (However, he is a Friendzoned target). This could be several. More the better?
                  • Antagonist Female Character. Must bully the Female Lead. Before being 'destroyed' by the MC and sometimes the Male Lead supporting from the shadow? Sometimes Male Lead will act the knight in shinning armor saving the Female MC?
                  • Any competitor of Love = Antagonist Female Character. Her cronies would appear first as appetizer. Sometimes friendzoned supporting male could act as a teammates to this antagonist.

                      A romance about the realization that self love is more beneficial than having to live your life dependent on someone else's emotional baggage for self acclimation to life. Lets have a romance that ends not on a good note really. With the partner in the end going, "You know what, lets be friends." after a roller coaster of ups and downs. Surprise ending which makes people go WTF and opens discussion about how the author is a sadist.

                        It would be nice to get the novel (The Blackbellied President's Beloved Housewife) I was reading back. It's already on its 8th chapter and today when I checked, all the chapters have been removed. Now it states that "The story is coming soon." ??????? Any explanation would be nice.

                          Wabbitz
                          Actually one of Indonesian current hottest romance novel (because adapted to movie) didn't end with a good ending. I don't think readers would read/BUY the last novels. It tells about 'Senior High School' love. It was common those love would end. In the end both married their own partner. Some movie watchers had decided to stop watching the next series of the movie and novel from the spoiler. Nobody wanted their 'dream' to be crushed.

                          However, I believe nobody would read that author's book with sadist ending. So VERY Bad idea for a novelist who wanted to grow readers.

                          You don't want your novel to become a Good Written Novel which could add 'discussion' for some novel professors.

                          You want a BEST seller novel which could net money for author and entertainment for readers. (Nobody remember novel award winner ten years ago. However, I believe everyone have heard the best selling Novel series of all time, Harry Potter or the second best, Lord of the Rings series.)

                          That is a good way to lose fans. By becoming a SADIST author.

                          Nobody like real life store. Novel is an escape. Why read novel when you can 'learn' the pain in real life.

                              MasterRabbink it's true. People read to escape their daily hardships and want to imagine themselves as the mc rather than fantasize about something that they can't have a most people do not want to feel the pain and suffering that has no happy ending this is something I can not comply with.q

                                  Things I treat with extreme prejudice:

                                  -ML who has no other occupation other than to be FL's tagalong. His resume is "FL's ML". Don't you have a job to do? A kingdom to run? Someone to off? Go turn yourself into a proper character please.
                                  -Love triangles - this pretty much kills 50% of c-stories for me, but I bear with it.
                                  -Overly descriptive attributes for F or M leads. I didn't need the 101th time the author has told me how gorgeously flowing their locks are. We get it. They're the primordial sun that outshines everyone while they burn all other peasants to a crisp for not being worthy enough.
                                  -Heroines with their IQ in the negative digits, gullible, and jumping into traps & misunderstandings like it's a buffet and they're a starving desert island survivor.

                                  What I look for:

                                  -A strong heroine.
                                  -Heroines who have other important things to do besides being in a romance. A world to save, people to kick ass, corporations to take over.
                                  -There are actual secondary female characters that aren't used as a foil to the FL. Secondary female characters that are GOOD and fleshed out.

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