HATE HATE HATE
UnderTaker26 you would be surprised at how woman in the real world would share a man lols like you think people dont know celebrities are married ? but they still go sleep with them for a check lols
UnderTaker26 thats true i felt that part in sotr was a bit of a stretch like you know this guy whose essentially a god at pill refining whos been in contact with god tier material but cant neutralise this through some way besides raping this girl ???
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This doesn’t apply to webnovels so much as anime, manga and stories in general but I hate when main characters have amazing abilities but never get a payday or are always in debt. These people are the most amazing beings in the planet but they can’t even pay for their livelihoods or barely make ends meet? There’s something inherently wrong about that.
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Hard to balance an MC with absolute power. So I suppose being poor at start or having a personality quirk is the authors attempt at attempting to balance and failing (subjectively)? Better throw random women in there to give some flavor.
It's like making a Powerpuff Girl, instead you start with the Chemical X and then toss in the Sugar, Spice, and everything nice; not the other way around.
Wabbitz personality quirk I approve but being poor I despise. Take goku for instance, Even if he doesn’t get sponsors and such for his strength he could gather the dragonballs in a week or less. He could wish to be rich but he’s even let the dragon leave with wishes remaining. He even forgot to revive king kai. Dbs super killed goku for me and almost the entire season. Most of these people have ways to get rich but don’t do so for what I see as a poor attempt at comedy which I wish they’d drop as it belittles the character who may have even saved the world.
UnhingedTaboo you should read War Sovereign Soaring through the Heavens.. this mthrfkr is Godly.. and jst when u dnt think anything can explosive happen another antagonist pops up who is even more overbearing the situation from before that j thought nothing can exceeds shit happens again tht jst blows ur mind away... Lol I'm obviously paraphrasing the guy who reviews the novel saying jst when u think the car crash of the century jst happened another fucking bus come crashing into the crash n more explosions.. if u think you knw wht harem is you'll be sorely disappointed MC is jst so so OP so cliche tht he broke through and he's even more badass more charming exquisite that even had his martial aunt contemplating if she was younger would she hook up with the MC thts jst how Godly the Nigga is.
RaiXEL You are still young Padawan, you don't know how high the heavens is. Have you ever heard of Peerless Martial God?? This next exert is from one of the reviewers from NU.
From Shikonbel(NU)-
Alright, let's just go ahead and get this out of the way: the translator is incredible. She translated hundreds of chapters at an insane speed, with only a bump here recently due to an illness or something.
However, the translation speed is at this point literally the only good thing about this novel. Some people will try to tell you that this novel is just a great "action" novel with a focus on "fight scenes" and is therefore not for everyone. Similarly, people will tell you that it is like ATG and MGA, with an arrogant MC whose main focus is to satisfyingly beat the living s*** out of various antagonists.
Let me tell you, this story is in an entirely different league. No, this is not a compliment. ATG and MGA are entire TIERS above this novel, which is one of the worst, most boringly stupid things I have ever had the misfortune to read, and I read Twilight.
The entire thing is filled with fight scenes, and not one of them (especially recently) is remotely satisfying. What is there to be excited about? You don't even meet the villains long enough to actually hate them properly. Killing them is no different than killing air. Air that likes to spew petty insults, but still ultimately just air. The love interests and side characters lack any depth, and the MC is so contradictory I question whether he is even the same MC.
I actually liked the novel at first too, because the initial plot (while somewhat vague) was engaging. There were a lot of points that could be developed, like the MC's background, his spirits, finding his parent (s), learning more about his mysterious love interest (s), political struggles between family members and princes... Unfortunately, and for reasons I can't fathom, the author completely gives up on all these interesting points, just so he can force in another copy-paste fight.
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Even when the MC finally finds his mother, whom he has never met before, the interaction is boring, empty, bland, and stupid. You'd think meeting his mother for the first time would be a touching moment or a time for him to finally confront his parents for basically abandoning him his entire life for no apparent reason, but no. Instead, we get some useless, vague descriptions and not a single sentence of actual emotion or character development.
The worst part is that the MC easily accepts the random excuse that his parents ignored him to allow him to grow stronger by himself. In the same chapter, it turns around and says they wanted him to live an ordinary life. Then it again contradicts everything by saying that they wanted him to be ordinary, but then learned he had potential, so wanted him to be strong and left him alone despite knowing he was actually too weak to survive alone, but that was ultimately something they, as two of the the most talented people of their generation, had to do. Just because. Um, what?
Clearly, the author only has half a brain cell, and assumes that the readers have even less.
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This is the most repetitive novel I have ever seen. Every aspect is shallow and poorly done at best, from the constantly reused fight scenarios, to the dialogue and word choice. Apparently the author doesn't own a dictionary. It's pure laziness.
Aside from the repetitiveness, the worst aspect of this novel is undoubtedly the MC's hypocrisy and unbelievable arrogance. He is literally making enemies at every turn, then killing them for the exact same f***ing reasons they attacked him in the first place.
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It basically goes like this:
Bad Guy Clone 1: Hur dur what a weak trash, kneel before me and I might spare your corpse!
MC: You kill/provoke/ignore/look down on others for no reason, and I take offense to that! I act like a non-descript weakling and you actually believe I am one, and I take offense to that! How dare you tell me to kneel, DIE!
Crowd: Haha, what a weak idiot! The MC will never beat Villain Clone 1!
insert chapters of drawn out "fight scenes" consisting of a few moves punctuated by random insults, the word 'DIE' in all caps, and lengthy commentary by the ignorant crowd. Inevitably, the MC or his companion (s) win the fight
Crowd: Wooaaaaahhhh~! Lin Feng won. Look how awesome he is! Besides, Lin Feng is just so powerful that he could kill "talented" Villain Clone 1 instantly!
MC: You (Villain Clone 1) offended me, acted arrogantly, and killed recklessly, therefore you deserved to die! Blah blah weak excuses blah.
Clan/father/sect of Villain Clone 1: You trash dared to kill my disciple/son/relative?! I heard about how strong you are but still can't believe it! Obviously you should have stood there and let them kill you! Now I have to bring a bunch of other people to kill you in front of a crowd, despite the fact that you've become famous for your strength/ruthlessness and everyone knows who and how you are!
Then the MC goes and trains (no interesting description of his cultivation either- everything just gets handed to him. He just keeps leveling up for no justifiable reason) and then proceeds to beat into the ground the latest batch of idiots. MC moves to a new location and repeats the exact same scenario.
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The author has the vocabulary of an elementary school student and an ego the size of the entire country of China, with every chapter repeatedly and shamelessly praising the MC as intelligent/strong/handsome/unrivaled/carefree/honest/kind/free and unrestrained when he is clearly none of those things. Every time I see these often repeated words, I cringe so hard I'm pretty sure my neighbor's dogs are cringing too. It's just ridiculous and unjustified.
The MC offends then kills/cripples/beats virtually every character introduced in the story for no reason other than "you've offended me", but he still makes these horrific preachy speeches about how and why the latest Villain Clone completely deserved everything he got.
I did my best to stick with it, because I hate leaving things half-way finished, but I really, really can't take it anymore. I have to drop it, because every new chapter I can feel myself slowly dying inside. If I really stuck with this until the end, I'm afraid I'd end up morphing into the MC/Villain Clone #don'tgiveast.
To sum it all up:
1) The MC quickly became a preachy, arrogant ahole who spends all his time killing off other stupid f**ktards. I promise, no matter how promising the beginning looks to you, no matter how much free time you have on your hands, this novel is absolutely not worth it. You'd be better off reading basically anything other than this.
2) Plot: Shallow, repetitive
Side Characters: Unimportant and undeveloped
MC: Arrogant, boastful, an insane killer who believes he's a good man, has the emotional range of a toaster
Antagonists: Clones of the same villains over and over again
Dialogue: Copy-pasted from previous chapters (I swear it's almost word for word)
Cultivation: Barely mentioned, poorly described if at all, sudden jumps in level, no real description of power levels, and skill mastery, technique and philosophical aspects are all non-existent
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