Great job since typos are very very rare.
Chapter 17
Your tiny and insignificant spell can be broken by me in the time it takes for my to finish a cup of tea.
Your tiny and insignificant spell can be broken by me in the time it takes for me to finish a cup of tea.
(me instead of my)
27
"What did you say?! Not only the Sect Leader didn’t let that scoundrel apologize, he borrowed the training ground to him to arrange a feast?!"
"What did you say?! Not only the Sect Leader didn’t let that scoundrel apologize, he lent the training ground to him to arrange a feast?!"
(shouldnt it be lent instead of borrowed?
the Sect Leader lent the training ground to the MC
31
The only man eventually decided to give in to him, whatever he might ask. He then sighed as he spoke slowly.
The man eventually decided to give in to him, whatever he might ask. He then sighed as he spoke slowly.
32
If you wish to exact revenge, don't’ do it on my Fallen Spirits Sect.
If you wish to exact revenge, don't do it on my Fallen Spirits Sect.
(don't)
41
Damn it. We shouldn’t have spoken about that. The minute you mentioned eggs, I realized how hungry I am!
Damn it. I shouldn’t have spoken about that. The minute I mentioned eggs, I realized how hungry I am!
(the context is that the MC mentioned eggs and realized how hungry he was...)
See the sentences in context:
Xu Que laughed out loud, "Please don’t worry. There’s no need to run. As long as they’re in the Original Infant Stage, they’re all finished like broken eggs!"
Eggs?
Damn it. We shouldn’t have spoken about that. The minute you mentioned eggs, I realized how hungry I am!
Luckily, the sky still looks clear. Let’s prepare some good food to eat. If not, where will I get the energy to fight?
42
The entire condiments set did not cost much, requiring merely a little acting tough points!
The entire condiments set did not cost much, requiring merely a few acting tough points!
45
At this point, the Blood River Sect members were almost reaching!
(is it me or is this sentence not flowing well?)
maybe something like this instead
At this point, the Blood River Sect members were almost within reach!
47
She looked as if she had just boarded a pirate board and was in deep trouble.
She looked as if she had just boarded a pirate ship and was in deep trouble.
47
The shadow of it looked so much like an illusion,l with a crazy amount of force behind the buster sword as it slammed right into them.
(get rid of that "I")
The shadow of it looked so much like an illusion, with a crazy amount of force behind the buster sword as it slammed right into them.
47
Everyone from the Blood River Sect and even some demonic beasts who were hiding around, along with many other trees were completely frozen to ice.
frozen to ice
frozen into ice
Not sure which one is correct
53
After All, the God Powered cannon was out of this world.
After all, the God Powered cannon was out of this world.
58
As if now, his cultivation level has already reached the full foundation of the Golden Core Stage.
As of now,
59
How could a Core Bearing Stage disciple kill an Original Infant Stage cultivator in front of an Infant Stage Cultivator?
How could a Core Bearing Stage disciple kill an Original Infant Stage cultivator in front of an Infant Transformation Stage Cultivator?
60
All the cultivation he did when he was alive was absorbed till he withered.
All the cultivation he had when he was alive was absorbed till he withered.
63
However, the situation at hand was still very endangering to Xu Que.
(maybe I am wrong but the sentence doesn't flow for some reason .....)
However, the situation at hand was still very dangerous to Xu Que.
65
Damn… now that I recall, isn’t this the group I saw at the tea house six months ago?
Damn… now that I recall, isn’t this the group I saw at the tea house six days ago?
(change months to days......the MC saw them on Chapter 59.....Very short time elapsed since then so 6 months is most likely a typo)
66
After he destroyed the entire Phaseless Faction a few days back, he had accumulated four hundred over act tough points.
After he destroyed the entire Phaseless Faction a few days back, he had accumulated over four hundred act tough points.
(over four hundred)
66
"To spend some much money on hiring these Sky Demon killers to ambush us, the Metal Nation are really big spenders.
"To spend so much money on hiring these Sky Demon killers to ambush us, the Metal Nation are really big spenders.
68
The Flaming Sun Princess stared and her sourly and did not say a single word.
The Flaming Sun Princess stared at her sourly and did not say a single word.
69
The Flaming Sun Princess fronwed as well, her expression was one of coldness and indifference.
The Flaming Sun Princess frowned as well, her expression was one of coldness and indifference.
