69
Then we can happily depart from the Imperial City."
Then we can happily travel to the Imperial City."
(they are traveling to the Imperial City, not leaving)
Ultimate Scheming System
73
Once a person enters, nobody has ever made it out alive. y
Yet you…"
(get rid of the y)
74
This person…. After hearing that a pair of Infant Transformation Stage cultivators had arrived wasn’t afraid.
This person wasn't afraid after hearing that a pair of Infant Transformation Stage cultivators had arrived.
75
A sacred equipement of the Demacia’s Lightshield Clan.
A sacred equipment of the Demacia’s Lightshield Clan.
77
After all, throwing someone out was better than letting them throw their lives!
After all, throwing someone out was better than letting them throw away their lives!
83
Xu Que had already been ignoring the weird looks and mockery the passer bys had been giving him.
Xu Que had already been ignoring the weird looks and mockery the passersby had been giving him.
81
Rumor has it that there is only one within every thousand miles."
Rumor has it that there is only one within every thousand meters."
(change it to every thousand meters"
since it was mentioned later that the Star Miscanthus appear one every thousand meters on Chapter 84
"Everybody knows that there is only one Star Miscanthus every thousand meters.)
92
However, these Sky Incense Valley seemed to hide their shock very well.
However, these Sky Incense Valley disciples seemed to hide their shock very well.
93
Now that Xu Que willingly took off his armor and even kept his weapon, their blood started boiling with red hot vengeance once more!
Now that Xu Que willingly took off his armor and even put away his weapon, their blood started boiling with red hot vengeance once more!
(he put away his weapon....not kept his weapon)
93
A female disciple spoke out, "Master Hua, please don’t be impulsive. There are no many of them. How can you…"
A female disciple spoke out, "Master Hua, please don’t be impulsive. There are so many of them. How can you…"
(so many)
94
"It can't be fake since the disciples of Sky Incense Valley themselves admired to this!"
"It can't be fake since the disciples of Sky Incense Valley themselves admitted to this!"
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96
"Wow, fuck!"bXu Que could feel his soul tremble slightly and felt as if his soul was about to leave his body from that immense wave.
"Wow, fuck!" Xu Que could feel his soul tremble slightly and felt as if his soul was about to leave his body from that immense wave.
(Xu Que)
96
His entire body seem to have be frozen to the ground.
His entire body seem to have been frozen to the ground.
98
"What did the black robed young man did again?"
"What did the black robed young man do this time?"
102
"It’s no big deal. Many people eat faeces too."
"It’s no big deal. Many people eat feces too."
102
It smells bad, but it’s taste is spectacular?
It smells bad, but its taste is spectacular?
105
At the next moment, both of the were stumped.
At the next moment, both of them were stumped.
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109
Just to gain vision of the Empress, Hong Yan was within the domains of the Fire Nation and requires the strength of four Infant Transformation Stagers.
Just to gain vision of the Empress Hong Yan, who was within the domains of the Fire Nation, required the strength of four Infant Transformation Stagers.
109
"Boom!:
"Boom!"
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111
Just after two seconds, the Empress couldn’t help but break out into a smile as her body turned away shily before speaking
Just after two seconds, the Empress couldn’t help but break out into a smile as her body turned away shyly before speaking
(shyly)
114
Before long, he reachrd a considerable distance behind the demonic humans.
Before long, he reached a considerable distance behind the demonic humans.
115
"How…nhow could this be? How is he able to catch up to us?"
"How…how could this be? How is he able to catch up to us?"
115
"Sysnthesis?"
"Synthesis?"
holy shit, do monster paradise next. it got a lot of them
116
"What? Password?" Xu Que stunned for a second. This shithole requires a password? Damn it! I should have asked that two guys just now."
(please get rid of the quotation mark at the end)
116
However, if you let the spell enter it's offensive phase, the probability will become 100%.
However, if you let the spell enter its offensive phase, the probability will become 100%.
(its)
117
In no time, the spell wall started to distort, as if iy was transforming into the mouth of a blood basin.
In no time, the spell wall started to distort, as if it was transforming into the mouth of a blood basin.
117
"What a close shave! I almost inured the both of you!
"What a close shave! I almost injured the both of you!
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117
"Little Fox, be reasonable. When I touched you just now, how was I to differentiate your chest from your back since you’re so flat? And it wasn’t on purpose. d
Do you have to insult me and call me obscene?" Xu Que stared and rebutted.
.
.
.
"Little Fox, be reasonable. When I touched you just now, how was I to differentiate your chest from your back since you’re so flat? And it wasn’t on purpose. Do you have to insult me and call me obscene?" Xu Que stared and rebutted.
118
The both couldn’t help but turn their heads and looked at the mountainous spell area of the Thousand Demon Tribe.
Both of them couldn’t help but turn their heads and looked at the mountainous spell area of the Thousand Demon Tribe.
118
More importantly, an ancient one which had been passed down centuries ago was gone just like that.
More importantly, an ancient protective spell which had been passed down centuries ago was gone just like that.
(ancient protective spell)
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Original Infant and Infant Transformation confusion......for the Fox Queen.
118
"I don’t, but I am not blind. You are at the Full Foundation Infant Transformation stage and a beautiful lady of the fox race. You totally suit the position as the Queen of the Sky Demon Tribe!"
it was mentioned in an earlier chapter 115 that
"One of them is the King of our Thousand Demon Tribe, the Tiger-Dragon King. Another one of them is the King from the Sky Demon Tribe, the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox! They have already been in the Full Foundation Original Infant Stage for many years.
which is it?
Original Infant Stage
or
Infant Transformation
so maybe chapter 115 contain the typo of cultivation level.
118
How can you not know this.
How can you not know this?
More confusing in cultivation level of the Fox Queen.
If she is Full Foundation Infant Transformation, why is she in danger when facing the 5 assassins who are Full Foundation Original Infant?
So most likely both the Fox Queen and the Tiger-Dragon King are both Original Infant (full foundation) and will face the thunder tribulation to become Infant Transformation Level 1
123
(change "he was excited beyond words" to "he was angry beyond words" because the context doesn't make any sense if he was excited)
That’s why when Xu Que stumbled upon the "Two Star Alchemist Ability Book" price, he was excited beyond words.
[Two Star Alchemist Ability Book]:
After purchasing and activating, it would cause the user to attain Two Star Alchemist Ranking. He would be able to refine Two Star Pills at a 100% success rate!
Price : 1500 act tough points.
"Screw this!" Xu Que’s lips curled into a snarl. Compared to the One Star Alchemist Ability Book, this Two Star Book was more expensive by a thousand act tough points.
123
"Ding! Congratulations to hots ‘Xu Que’ for activating the Two Star Alchemist Ability Book.
"Ding! Congratulations to host ‘Xu Que’ for activating the Two Star Alchemist Ability Book.
124
"Hm, this damned monkey… He knows how to do everything!" Su Xiao Qi pursed her lips and cleared her through.
"Hm, this damned monkey… He knows how to do everything!" Su Xiao Qi pursed her lips and cleared her throat.
(throat)
124
Can you please accommodate to Xiao Yu?"
Can you please accommodate Xiao Yu?"
125
Xu Que let out a contented smile as he patted Xiao Yu’s tiny skull affectionately and sighed out, "What a good and knowledgeable child!"
Xu Que let out a contented smile as he patted Xiao Yu’s tiny head affectionately and sighed out, "What a good and knowledgeable child!"
(head)
ssound5rs Please do The Strongest Gene and Meltdown System in Eschatology too. These are my favorite novels. =)