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So I will post the good side. I don't like reading first person view, but I can read this novel. Which show the first person didn't make me felt forced to get into the character. Description is vivid and more than just describing physical thing closer to make readers experience the moment. There are moments which makes me smile. Which means this novel will entertain the readers.

The bad. The chapter is a bit too long thus make the idea felt a bit prolonged. Similar to my novel mistake (This Rabbink just delete some of my stockpiles, since they explained too much but didn't move the story forward.). The MC explain thing a bit too many. However, I think that is only Chapter 1 problem. I believe next chapter will be more of their interaction.

      Weird. Isn't this thread stickied? Why has it floated way down to the second page?

      ImBloo
      Stickied pages float down all the time. WebNovel forums are whacky.

      I didn't read your vampire novel. I give it a 0/5. I hate it despite not reading it. I especially hated the werewolf despite it being about vampires. What? There is no werewolf? I wouldn't know. I didn't read it.
      In all seriousness, I added it to my queue. Will read when I get a chance lol. I still have your other book sitting in my queue as well.

          SnoozySloth I get it. It totally deserves the hate. Please continue hating it. If you hate it enough, please throw (power) stones at it :(

              Check out Not That Kind of Transition, a comedy genderbender Xuanhuan story!
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              In a world that had forgotten about the Martial Path long before its sudden return, James Grace is far from strong enough to join one of the experimental sects looking to rediscover the path to immortality. But when he discovers a lost sutra that is suited to his thin and weak form, what changes will he have to go through to take the road that lay before him.

                WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL If I ever wrote something, it'd be about a Human male who's basically stuck in an endless ground hogs day type of scenario (except he only travels back in time/ reincarnates when he dies - could be of old age, suicide, murder, sickness). Guy is basically tired of living the same 100ish years repeatedly. Decides on his newest re-incarnation to observe an upcoming natural disaster (sumani or something) and bumps into a strange female (vampire) who finds his behavior/actions interesting as she stalks him while he's going around the world observing natural disasters. - Then near the end of the LN I'd have it were he liberates himself by becoming a vampire to break the endless 100 year cycle.

                    [unknown] Or he could become a Vampire after the world trip (A dozen or so natural disasters in a row). - Female is fascinated by his omnipotent behavior. And he sets up a Firm and takes advantage of the world economy while he sets a solid foundation for himself for after the 100 years of omnipotent behavior wares off. /shrug. Could go either way or both on style of writing.

                      DarkImmortal_Intel So I guess he's already like an immortal, like a vampire already. So even though he's a mortal human on the surface, he's lived for 1000's of years already since he's re-lived the same life over and over after each death/reset.

                          Check out Azure Lightning, an entry for the xuanhaun contest.
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                          A boy adventures through a mysterious land as he attempts to find out just where he came from. He develops his powers to fight off stronger and stronger enemies along the way as learns of the harshness of the cultivator world.

                            MasterRabbink rabink... i feel like you should have trevor mak3 w crack at writting a novel... hehe.

                                WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL If I had the time, I'd seriously take this challenge, considering Vampire Immortal was the setting for a novel I was planning for like 2 years. I had/have too much clutter in my mind and way to many issues url to concentrate on it.

                                Honestly, I had a Female MC who has a Vampire Father and Immortal Mother. At some 10 arcs in, we find out many misfortunes that happened in arc 3-4 were orchestrated by here father, who is actually an almost direct descendant of MC's past life, who was actually a close friend to her grandfather of this life... whom she allowed to kill
                                HIM due to Forced curcumstances.

                                The soul of our MC is the same, but the memories are basically non existent, so not a complete rebirth or reincarnation, but can't be neglected.

                                Any one keen on using thus setting can Go ahead, Just tell me. I want to see what someone can do with this setting.

                                    ImBloo I'll give a go at this. I'll give some feedback later, junior. hehe, it sounds very promising.

                                        GAmeDOS I'll also take a look at this. The synopsis is well made, it intrigued me. Good Luck

                                            Hello guys!
                                            I'm participating in yet another contest!

                                            It was a story that was already planned, but I was going to publish later, however, because of this challenge I decided to publish sooner than expected.

                                            It is a BL story and is part of the Xuanhuan universe of Reincarnations that I have been publishing.

                                            If you like, leave a comment.

                                            My Yin turned Yang!
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                                            The cover is not so good, I'll see if I edit a better one.

                                              Always lethargic at day and yet enlivened at night? Are you talking about me because I'm prettey sure this is what accurately describes me as a nocturnal human.😂

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