Panqiuyan
Hello frnd. thank u for ur review and yea, i will do a rework in my earlier chapters, but before that, can u please chck my latest chapter and tell me whether or not, should i change the perspective of telling. i mean, currently its first-person, so, should i make it 3rd person or keep it like that.
thank u in advance.
anyone else who wanna check my novel, here's the link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11690885806474605

      JunkieOverThe_Moon
      It is up to you on the point of view of your story. If you want to explore other character's thoughts besides the main character. I would suggest going with the third person. But remember each point of view has pros and cons. You should do some research to figure out which one would suit your story.

          MishalZamir Plz do mine sir FIRST! XD. [I just want to inform u that u said the same thing 'will review urs first' in all of ur comments. so, whom are u gonna review first????
          mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11690885806474605/Endless-Adventure-%3A-The-Initiation
          will be happy if u can have some time for me sir. [On a side note: i will be grateful if u plz review my latest chapter and tell me about my perspective and story-telling part. I need to rework my first volume chapters, so reviewing them would be meaningless now]
          Thank u in advance!
          EldridSmith Sir, plz do mine if u have some free time.

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