Hi, guys! Since there seems to be some serious (ly good) reviewing going on in this thread, I just wanted to poke my head out and volunteer my novel, Godking: Ascending the Heavens, for some reviewing. It was previously titled The Traitor God.
As someone who has written typical 'English-style' stories before (long descriptions, tonnes of worldbuilding etc.) writing a webnovel has made me consciously change my style quite a lot to become faster paced - I'm just worried I've swung too hard to the other side.
My strategy was to go fast-paced (perhaps its only fast to me, also a problem) and slowly introduce character description and the world. In short, I'm worried my novel's little tidbits of worldbuilding here and there are too scattered/little for readers to feel immersed.
If you guys could have a look and share some thoughts here, that would be much appreciated. Thank you!