DarkClaymore I added your book early on! It's so interesting and something I've been wanting to write! But probably will never do.
Will get round to reviewing later tonight! Or tomorrow...
Maybe like, you can cross reference to what I wrote about danmachi title and how to "sell" the idea here Ierrech . For example, when I view your book title in mobile, I don't see MOBA prominently. I have to click in to realise it's about that!
Ierrech I actually put "A MOBA Esport Story" in the title for that purpose. Are you saying it's not visible enough?
I don't use the mobile version, so I'm not sure how it displays things. Does it cut things out on certain pages or something?
Lord_of_Potatoes "Thump, thump, thump" it's the sound of scabies, not punches. :)
DarkClaymore oh, just checked. It's fine on mobile.
Seems you have very dedicated and supportive readers! Despite the views around 120k, the votes are keeping you very high!
Are there any things you are actually looking at or want to improve...?
What are collections at right now....
Ierrech Collections are about 448 right now (or 442 according to the graph, one of the two must be lying LUL). Not sure if that's considered high here, but I have a feeling it's not. Even on RoyalRoad that amount would be pretty low and I think this site has a larger reader base. And, on RoyalRoad I'm stuck at merely 140 followers. #NeverGetReaders
In general, I'd just like to hear what readers think is good and bad about the story, as well as what they think should improve. I don't get much reviews or criticism, neither here nor on RoyalRoad, so I can't really tell what the majority of the people truly think about the story.
Just from reading few reviews I got, they paint an optimistic picture that make it sound like I'm doing a fine job. But, hard for me to believe that's truly the case. Not only is this story very experimental, but fact is - the story doesn't have that many reader atm.
So, what's the reason? The writing? The story? The characters? The cover? The blurb? I can't pinpoint what I should work on. If the lack of popularity is purely due to the genre being niche, I'll accept it. But, I'm sure there's more to it.
DarkClaymore Graph is one (or two) day behind. As long as your collection > the last number on the graph = you made progress.
Ierrech qualified material = qualified public = little amount of public
I write my book on my own time because I hate the pressure to release consistently. Plus writing a good novel takes time. School take my whole time.
