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Here's my entry for the #26 prompt: Legendary Mage

Rebirth: Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
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Rebirth: Legend of the Gunslinger Mage

Synopsis

In 2078, the Virtual Reality game Leagues of Legendary Legends (or L3) is a worldwide phenomenon, with a player base of 500 million and an in-game economy comparable to Russia.

Mahn Li, the top player of the guild Scourge, was betrayed by his closest friend Fatty Fu - murdered in the real world. The in-game business is tied with real world business. And business, as they say, is war. Mahn Li is simply another casualty…

… Until he inexplicably wakes up in the body of his 22 year old self - one week before the game went live.

Is this my second chance? He was confused.

What should I do? Should I find a job? A real one? Be a good, contributing member of society? Live a meaningful life? Forget about the 10 years of my life lost in endless battles in a virtual world?

F*CK THAT!!!

I’m gonna wreck all the bastards responsible for my death! And Fatty Fu! Wait until I get my hands on your slimy neck!

Aiding Mahn Li on his quest for vengeance are his knowledge of the future. Using it, he will get the sickest, baddest gears in the game! The most powerful of them all is an artifact that is a little bit out of place in this fantasy-themed game.

A gun.

If you guys enjoy the novel, pls leave a comment, review and vote vote vote :100: Wooo!

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      Entry for Writing Prompt Contest #26: Legendary Mage

      Here’s my entry for the Writing Prompt Contest! Hope for your big support!

      This is my 2nd novel after “Rebellion Against the Heavenly Fate/ No System? No Problem!” which is still on-going. Targeting 5 chapters this week; 3 chapters are already up!

      Title: Desolate Mage: A Legend Reborn
      Sub-text: After being heart-broken. Reincarnated as a Demon’s Contractor!
      Cover:
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      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12013957905760805/Desolate-Mage%3A-A-Legend-Reborn

      Genres: Romance, Fantasy, Action, Other World, Reincarnation, OP MC Strong from the start (after introductory chapters)

      Synopsis:
      History’s youngest legendary mage has a broken heart.
      While he fought to defend Earth against other-worldly invaders; his fiancée and childhood sweetheart of 10 years chose to marry another man!
      With nothing to live for; he leads a squad of his closest brothers and sisters to cross over and scout their invader’s world - only to be wiped out; betrayed by the squads big brother, their most trusted member.
      On the brink of death; his soul is protected and reincarnated by a mystical necklace his former lover gave him…
      …And contracted to a demon – to wreak havoc across the planes.

      Will he find new hope for living?
      Will he make it back alive and escape the curse of the demon…? Or be found out as a spy and executed...?
      How will he survive when he falls in love with an impossible lover – his world's sworn enemies...!

          Ierrech
          My review of his novel if anyone is interested. Highly recommend it based on the first two chapters. After that, I'm unsure.

          Note: I give full 5 stars despite whatever I write below. Please forgive any grammar mistakes in my review, as I am writing it on mobile. Reveiw written as of only 3 chapters being written, so keep that in mind. The author may edit things which would result in a higher score than described below. Writing Quality 4/5: Writing flows well and is of high-quality. Minus half a point for a few small grammar mistakes. Minus half a point for using parentheses for internal thoughts. No idea what's up with that. Most authors either just write internal thoughts openly or enclose them in single quotes. Never seen parentheses being used before exept for maybe systems. Writing will be 5/5 if these things are fixed. Updates 5/5: New novel with 3 chapters instantly published. Story 4/5: A very strong start that immediatly builds a super interesting world. An alternative history Earth, eastern cultivation world, and potentially other worlds. I hope MC has some ultimate goal soon. Minus 1 point for chapter 3 confusing me. Character Design: 5/5. MC isn't my cup of tea but I still liked him anyways suprisingly. Excellent emotions. Antagonist was good too. World background 5/5: As mentioned earlier. Awsome worlds from the start. Suggestions for author 1. Change parenthese internal thoughts to single quotes. 2. Chapter 3... I don't know, but maybe explain what's going on. Are we still following MC reincarnated or not. Did I miss something? I'm admittedly pretty tired right now so I may have... Final thoughts: First two chapters are damn amazing. You can tell the author put a good amount of effort and love into them. He took everything he did great in his other novel and improved on it drastically by making the story easy to read and follow. If author keeps up the same quality as the first two chapters, then I see this easily entering the top 100 and higher.

              WEBNOVEL_OFFICIAL Dear Webnovel.

              The pinned post is not pinned, it keeps sinking to the bottom! Haha!

              Also, does anyone know if I can know my ranking in the contest during the week...?

                  SnoozySloth thanks so much @SnoozySloth !
                  I've changed the () to ' ' for inner thoughts.

                  What grammar mistakes did you notice...? I'd love to fix them!

                  Fun fact:
                  My phone corrects "inner" to "dinner"

                      SnoozySloth thanks snoozy!! I can read the same chapter 10 times and still can't see those mistakes!! Thanks for spotting and helping out...

                      Very kind of a top 100-er to help a lowly plebeian like me..

                        Here's my first try in the writing prompts contest!
                        Entry for Writing Prompt Contest #26: Legendary Mage
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                        Title: Reborn as a Sea Spirit

                        Genre: Fantasy

                        Synopsis: Sassy university student turned Sea Spirit VS Saintly Mysterious Royal Mage
                        I am a normal university student. When I opened my eyes from my nap, I became a side character in the novel I read. I was under the sea.
                        Ianthe: "Wait didn't this character die in the last chapter? I have to avoid my death no matter what! This silver haired gentleman who rescued me, do you need a maid?"
                        Follow Ianthe's life to avoid her inevitable death while studying to be a top mage!

                        This is my first try in a writing contest. If you're interested in the story, it'll mean a lot if you can take a lot! Thank you :D

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                          Lucifer's Revenge

                          Summary
                          The story a mage who will die and become a statue in the Honorary Hall and then forgotten, even though all he did. Whereas the Prince will get cheering crown and festivals will be held to celebrate the crowning of the Prince. Then she, who left him will also forget him and marry Prince, all while thinking that she is doing this for the kingdom.

                          Now-now the story like this will become a lot boring, at least for those who like the protagonist not the Prince, so let's send him back in time.

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