Well, I started writing a novel. I'm at like 12 published chapters and some ten+ in reserve.
My story writing is obviously not the best but I'm satisfied.

I just can't get a good prologue running. There is always something that sets me off.
I checked some guides etc. but they didn't really help.
I thought I might as well start a discussion since there are a lot of authors and experienced readers here.

I'm thankful for any help.

Ah yes, in case you wanna understand what I write before writing a comment the novel's called:

The Story of a Protoss

Again thanks for any help

    Brandon Sanderson, successful fantasy writer, I can recommend his videos in general. But this one starting from minute 14 talks about the Prologue.
    If you want a short summary, it's about a promise to the reader starting with the very first chapter (Prologue). And how the Story is set up to fullfil this promise by end :)

      First thing first: A prologue isn't necessary to a story.

      Second thing: What's the purpose you're trying to achieve by setting this prologue?

      Third: What's the importance of this prologue?

      You could use your prologue to tell of a story, a story that wouldn't fit into your regular storyline, but is still important and needs to be told.
      You can use it to introduce a certain mood that you want the reader to feel before jumping into the main story. Think of the most recent scary movie you've seen. The show always starts off with a teaser of what the evil is, and then boom, right before the evil-being shows up, the scene cuts off and we jump to our main protagonist

      So, what message are you trying to convey with it?

        Nou Ren0Zero

        The prologue idea I got was, "My novel starts off quite slow and emotional focused. How do i hook my readers who are looking for action and explosions...?"

          Ierrech

          So your story is nice and slow, but you want to attract the readers who wants fast paced action? Hmm. Who you're writing to and who you're trying to reel in are two different groups... Do you see that problem? Focus on one group first, and develop it. Find a niche and thrive from it.

            Nou ah that's true. Rather than writing for everyone.

            Here's my chapter summary. I believe right now I am trying to write for everyone, but by nature I'm more of an action adventure and scheming writer

            Chapter 0: intense emotions, promise of spellcasting action
            C1: backstory, heartbreak, soldier
            C2: war, magic, buddies
            C3: big magic battle, betrayal
            C4: (pending rewrite) problematic reincarnation scene
            C5: intense battle with best buddy who betrays him.
            C6: verbal battle, emotions with lover
            C7: complicated encounter with lover
            C8: lover in trouble
            C9: the hero to the rescue... but the hero is the villain
            C10: MC to the rescue...!
            C11: MC loses
            C12: simultaneous side story of the watching big bosses
            C13: intruders defeat villain
            C14: hero awakens powers and rescues.

              Nou
              It is not as much of a message I try to set up, it is more of an introduction.
              At the start, I did not intend to write a prologue. I thought: Let's just write the story.
              But my story ended up being very slow-paced and I thought a prologue would be a good Idea to set the stage for the first impression.

              By experience and personal opinion, I believe that a slow pace at the start is mostly a bad idea. If you aren't a super good author, of course.
              I'm an amateur but I don't want to rewrite the story.

                Ren0Zero

                Prologues are a good place to introduce the mood, that I agree. However, if you're using it to, say, give us an overview of the character's personality, character, habits, life story, etc, I don't recommend it. Its a bit... tactless and flavorless. Those sorts of things can be—and often better off—woven into the storyline itself! "Introduction", however, is too vague for me to understand what you're truly trying to introduce, so therefore I can't say much about this. Introducing a character that will appear in Chapter 85 is still and introduction, much less an introduction of the main character.

                The pacing itself, doesn't matter as much in the beginning. What you need is to create tension (refer to here for an example). Build up. As good old Dr. Watson said, "Foreplay, Sherlock, foreplay." Wait, maybe he didn't say that. But you get my point. Set the mood. Build up tension. Don't be afraid to tease some details. Remember when writing, sometimes, less is more.

                Regardless on what you decide to write about your story, don't forget your hook! Set the tone you want, but don't forget the hook!

                Consider this prologue from one of my favorite books, with what I feel to have a slow pace and a slow start:

                Prologue

                There's two major hooks prevalent here. First one is the silence of three parts. When we reach to that point, most would wonder what those three parts are, and/or how could silence ever be possibly split into three parts!

                Then, to reel us in, the author starts to describe the three different parts. You can see here, in his second paragraph, a glimpse of descriptive writing. He didn't just say, "The first silence is the lack of everyday noises, that stillness. Nothing would be heard."

                Instead, he talked of everyday mundane things that, while we don't necessarily pay attention to, would create and generate these noise that are currently not there. With the emphasis on "silence", the author choose words that would be associated with noises, the inn's sign creaking on its hook, clatter and clamor, etc.

                Once we understood the first silence, one that we can relate to and imagine, we're introduced to the second, then third. While being introduced to the three parts of a silence, the tone of the story gives off a "dark and somber" atmosphere.

                Upon reaching the end of the prologue, we can see that this dark and somber atmosphere is paired with the sound of a man who is waiting to die, causing the readers to understand the reason for the focus of this silence: someone is waiting for death.

                With that, this becomes our final hook: Why would he ever be waiting to die? He moves so confidently, as a knowledgeable person would. Does he know that his death is coming soon? Why is he waiting? Does he feel guilty about something? Does he feel like life isn't worth living anymore?

                We become hooked by what the three parts of a silence are, we were reeled in by the descriptions of each silence. As we read past the first part of a silence, the second, and upon reached the last leg of our journey (where our original hook would've been capable of bringing us to only), we came to find that there was another hook there, waiting for us, waiting to ensnare us. We were lead by the nose, drawn into another hook, the patient, cut-flower sound of a man who is waiting to die. Pray tell, did you wonder why the man was waiting to die? If you did, you were intrigued and possibly invested.

                And that causes us to jump into the story with curiosity after passing through this dark and somber period.

                I've taken the liberty to highlight some words that I feel helps create this atmosphere. Of course, there could be more subtle things that I've missed, but meh, it is what it is. I can only find and explain so much :S

                • Yellow = image-invoking words/phrases (Edit: Ack, my yellows aren't yellow anymore :S Oh well)
                • Pink = words/phrases that helps set the tone of the story
                • Green = auditory-invoking words/phrases

                Highlighted Prologue

                Okay, I've blabbered for too long low. I'll stop :S

                  Nou Thank you so much!!!

                  Sadly, webnovel authors are always racing for time... Rewrites are something highly desired but rarely something we get to do :(

                  • Nou replied to this.

                    Ierrech

                    Bruh, this is real talk now, 'tween you and I. You'll have ta choose: Are ya writin' for webnovel, or writin' for yerself?

                    When you write for someone, on a schedule, you'll have to push yourself. Just make sure you have a really well-fleshed out outline. Yes, the pressure is there. Yes, you'll grow and learn to do amazing things while you're at it, like writing a chapter a day. But at the same time, you'll have to be careful lest you end up doing things you wont be proud of—all just to meet the deadlines. Finish your story, if you must. Fulfill your obligations, I guess. But when it's all done, or you have time in between, try to rewrite. Try rewriting it in a different way, different technique, different narratives. Try exposing different information, cutting out unnecessary actions/scenes, etc. You need time for you.

                    Rewrites are important for self-growth. Like the saying goes,

                    “No man ever steps in the same river twice, for it's not the same river and he's not the same man.”

                    When you go back to rewrite your chapters, it wont be the same story anymore. I can almost guarantee that your story had developed in directions you didn't originally think you were going to head off in. Things that you originally started off with may be changed, combined, or taken out completely. It's not the same story, and you're not the same person. So I implore you, re-write when you can.

                      Nou Haha! Yup! But I do try to follow my outline... ;) else I have to replan alot of future plotlines as well

                        Nou
                        Thank you very much for your time and the help you offer. I will take some time and check everything I learned through all the help and then see whether or not a prologue is really as necessary as I thought it would be.
                        As an amateur, I don't want to in any way inhibit the story or take away the interest.
                        I will take some time and organize my thoughts.

                        Once again thank you very much for the help.

                        I love to read a novel very much...

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