First thing first: I've read through your story, but I haven't the time to type up things yet. You've not been forgotten.
But I do recommend you find someone (who is more fluent in English) to help you with your sentence constructions. For the most part, it is fine, but once in a while, there are these awkward sentence constructions.
KimSasha Once you pass the 10 mark and get a fanbase you've made it through the hard part. All that's left is to realize the vision you have in your head. When I wrote my first novel I dropped it, I have had 6 attempts and dropped all of them after 2-3 chapters. Only recently was I so focused on a scene I wanted create that I wrote a hundred chapters, 1 chapter a day for 3 months and made my vision real. After that I couldn't write for a long time, and only recently did I get that passion back again. I am going to ride this wave until it ends and hope that it doesn't, you'll regret surrendering to your fears no doubt about that.
Thank you for your nice comments and advices. After reading them and talking to different people, I came to introspected about what I wanted and how I got to this point. I hadn't seriously thought about a schedule for the release of my outings in my rush. Probably a shortcoming of the competitions for new authors. We are plunged directly into the water without any reference points and if everything goes too well, we start to think to much and lose our heads.
Since we have never had any "fans"; if I can call them like that or people enjoying our work, as soon as we see someone supporting us, we want to do everything to keep them and satisfy them, going up to forgetting why we started: The pleasure of unleashing our imagination with our stories and making our readers dream.
When I spoke with another author, I realized that if a work was good, it would necessarily be well received and followed even if the author only posted one chapter per week. So I should go at my own pace and present my story so that I can be satisfied with it. After all, I also write it for my own personal pleasure.
I'll not delete this topic so that if people find themselves sitting in my situation, I can refer them here.
Thank you again.
-KimSasha
Reinesse Thank you. Btw, can I have your discord so I can add you to my friends? Only if you want though ;)
Good luck with your requirements. I have a big project to end for my class for next week too and procrastinating too. Great minds think alike I guess 
KimSasha please, don't stop! I think we've been experiencing the same Reinesse right? As new writers, we tend to be overwhelmed by the expectations thrown at us by the readers or even our own expectations to ourselves.
I was thinking the same way that you did, like Reinesse, too. Probably. Though, unlike you, I didn't have as much readers. Thus, made me uneasy and sad. Considering the fact that we wrote those entries for passion, still there was a part of me, wanting people to at least give my entry a try. (As I know, my entry wasn't as good as others.) I was actually on the verge of dropping my story. I was a bit anxious. Really.
As I've said earlier, please do not stop. You are talented and you have the skills in writing a nice plot and definitely a worthy one. I am looking forward to the time you will complete your novel.
As for me, I still have to improve a LOT.
Let's do our best! 
Bibliophile_Anna I'll need your cord too plz If you want. I'll be easier to talk between authors like this.
Ierrech Hii!! Nice to see you here! I hope everything is going well for you. Congrats on winning the contest!! You deserve it :D
Bibliophile_Anna lol, i just clearly read this now. at least yours are objective, mine's not since i'm a little kid in their eyes.
KimSasha I had just downloaded discord and I have no idea how it works. 
but I got the same username. bibliophile_anna#6218
Reinesse Things will eventually be okay. You have the skills and the talent. Don't let other people bring you down. 
I still haven't checked your updated chapters. Let me read them and I'll tell you how great your work is. 
add me on discord. Just got mine now. I think it's easier to talk there
Bibliophile_Anna what's your discord?
Ierrech Hello! Mind giving my entry a try? I welcome feedbacks and suggestions that I direly need. By the way, I'm only new in WN.
Bibliophile_Anna check your discord account.
Bibliophile_Anna ok. Good story though I don't read pure romance novels :laughing:
KimSasha Hi, just wanted to say that your novel is on my reading list, I'm stockpiling some chapters before starting, so don't stress yourself, there are people like me who's willing to wait. I think a story is only good if it makes both readers and author happy, if you get stressed talk to your readers and rest, there will be people who wil stay and wait for you to come back. I'll be cheering for you, fighting!
Ierrech do you have discord acc?
Bibliophile_Anna yup, I'm Ierrech#4276
