May I take you up on this some time in the near future? I only have three chapters out at the moment.

I have an appreciation for honest reviewers, sometimes their take is more entertaining to read than the actual book. I go out of my way to read bad reviews now and then, when I want to scare myself sh*tless for when it's my turn.

Looking forward to your (hopefully not too bad) review! Thanks for offering to do this :)

    Can you review mine please? It's the first time I write in life si I wish to know if It's interesting. Name: Beyond the Mask (I'm on phone so I can't give you the link. (sorry)

    Then, mine, please. 😔 The first volume with six chapters was more of a prologue though so I'm not sure if you'll be able to rate the MC if you stopped reading before that, and it's kinda slow anyway. 😢 I haven't gotten any reviews yet, even with 62 chapters (yes, I'm begging for your review.) Be harsh please so I'll have an idea of what to do next too.

    https://www.webnovel.com/book/11339016205343105/The-Misfortunes-of-the-Blessed-Son

    Sorry for the long post! Thanks! 😁

      AzureOrchid92

      Hi! Not sure if we have PM here, I'm new at the site. I read the first two chapters of your book. You write well, and the world building seems pretty solid. The only thing I can think of that might be turning off potential readers is how you described the childbirth? I'm really not sure, though, that's the only thing I can think of. We seem to be from the same country, but clarify with me later if I'm wrong:

      Mukhang sinadya mo na mag-tunog talik yung panganganak? Medyo gets ko naman kung bakit, kaya lang may something na nakaka-off. Alam naman natin na kung gagawin "yun" ng tao, sa panganganak nga hahantong, pero madami sa atin ang ayaw ma-remind nun. Sana gets mo point ko.

      I'll be adding you to my library, because I can see you're good. And wow you made it to 60+ chapters of radio silence without getting too discouraged, I applaud you. I've only been serializing for a few days and I'm stressed out already XD

          WinterBud 😂😅 Yes, that scene was deliberate. I guess it might be off putting to some, but I know there were a few novels here that really focuses on that genre so I never thought it could be because of that. (Why am I being so hush-hush, not explaining what 'that' is.) 😅 Anyway, we can try discord if you want to discuss more. There's no PM here, yup. Here's mine: AzureOrchid92#7438

          Oh, and I always plan to finish anything I write even without readers. (It's not Ling's fault that nobody was liking his story.) 😁 As a reader myself, I've experienced getting disappointed by authors dropping or taking time continuing their works. And I have collections. They just don't comment so I was begging for reviews. 😁

              Elude Please check out my novel
              I really enjoy getting honest feedback... Warning Text blocks in the first 3 and 1/2 chapters are a plot feature.;,;. (Is explained in the later story)

              Elude My novel has less than 25 chapters, but it probably has about the amount of words in total that most novels would have in that many chapters.;,;.

                  Mine is at 20. Would that be enough for an honest review? Its still at the draft stage so Grammar and tense will be a bit off.
                  Azeal Neralum

                  I've been looking for a good critique for my novel. Though I've had some good one's already, I can always use more. So please give my novel a try.

                  English is my first language, so I have no excuse if my writing is terrible in any places, so tear me a new one if you find any difficulties with it :P I've been trying my best to reread my old chapters and edit them, but its quite the laborious task.

                  Anyway, here's my novel: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11320115605337405/Reincarnated-Cat-Becomes-a-Magical-Beast

                  AzureOrchid92 Hahaha, me too, why did I use another language to talk about it? Chinese censorship has me walking on eggshells these days, but nah, I just didn't want to leave a comment like that on the actual chapter because that might negatively affect you if new potential readers saw it.

                  I'll be adding you, but i'm also still new on discord. I live in a cave. I know no techno

                      Elude please review mine! Reborn as a demon! Only 3 chapters so should be very fast!

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