iloveJolo I have read the updated chapters and this is my take. Please update more. I would love to follow this book on its path.
The chapters are a bit short but that is the only downside I have seen so far. The grammar is good, the MC is relatable, and the interactions are fluid. It is catchy, and interesting and keeps the reader on the edge of their sit at every chapter.
I especially love the MC. He is down to earth, has an average majority upbringing, has hard-to-please parents, has small aspirations, and is a typical teenager. The book comes to life with realistic dialogues and interactions. Good work.

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