DragonKnight531 Hey! Sorry it's late. I gave your novel a review. :)
SUPERFAIL my book. my hero academy
DazzlingGem yeah I needed that, appreciate the help.
DragonKnight531 Phew~ Done editing but I didn't delete your errors, just corrected them. Anyway, I attached the link below. Let me know if you can't access the link. 
If so, let me know how to give you access or where else can I send it.
DragonKnight531 That's pretty easy, really- Patience, skill, and luck.
Patience and skill you can control with your actions and mindset. Luck you can't control. But having lots of patience and a ton of skill will mean you won't need much luck to succeed, whereas all the luck in the world won't help an unskilled and impatient writer succeed.
Focus on your craft, not the attention. If you put out shitty writing hoping for attention, you probably won't get it, and if you do, it won't be the attention you want.
Write good stuff, have the patience to wait as long as it takes to succeed, and be willing to put in a huge amount of effort building into the community, and you're pretty much guaranteed some degree of success.
There is no short or easy path to winning.
DragonKnight531 You've written 3 pages in 2 months and you're upset its not super popular or getting a ton of attention? I mean, I'm a pretty slow writer by this site's standards, and I put out a couple pages a DAY. =P
You've gotta write a LOT. You've gotta edit a LOT. You have to CONSTANTLY be trying to improve your craft through reading, studying other styles, and implementing feedback in a serious and structured manner.
And you have to make peace with the fact that you've gotta be really good to catch people's attention when surrounded by so many other talented people.
Success isn't just gonna fall into your lap because you quite literally put in the bare minimum possible effort =P
Forsaken1 
You mean edit?! But you already have Clowniac to do that! 
And I believe he's better than me.
I can give a review but it might take time. It took me days with just one chapter of Dragonknight531's.
DazzlingGem And I believe he's better than me.
pfft. Probably not.
Clowniac But you are! I've seen your posts here and your edit of Forsaken1's, uh, was that his first chapter? Anyway, that thread he made. Comparing it to what I did with DragonKnight531's was like, uh, I can't think of anything. Just that yours was better! 
The Clowniac is awesome, true. I must become even better than the clown. Muahaha
Forsaken1 I hope you donβt mean the whole novel. Personally I enjoyed the mistakes, since it added to your prankish charms
Forsaken1 You do remember that he said he'd been writing for 20+ years, right? When will your dream come true then?! XD I support your endeavor. 
Anyway, need me to review yours? I won't do editing anymore, especially yours with Clowniac already helping. Hmmp
- Edited
While I agree Clown is far better than me, I did his/her? not use his work, so everything is my writing and I took inspiration from his changes.
anyways I would love your input clowniac has not commented on the story at all, also I have edited the chapters, after his comments!
Forsaken1 Will do. But probably won't be able to post it this week. 
And I'll base my rating/review on the criteria on this site, same as what I did with DragonKnight531's.
Clowniac Noted, thank you I'll.use that to motivate myself! Its not the attention you get that matter but the work you make that you can be proud of. At least that's how I took it. (ｑο½₯Οο½₯ｑ)