Hello Everyone,
Please read and review my novel if possible. I haven't received any feedback on if my novel is good or not, and what I should include or not. Please help, any and all feedback is valued and appreciated!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/11329115905340105/The-Last-Space-King
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FrozenSynapses It's not my preferred genre to read so I can't fairly give an opinion on the content. One thing I'd advise you on is to change your book cover. It looks like a comic book, so I don't think it matches the styles of the covers here. It's also a bit confusing that the title presentations are different, plus the guy looks like he's Robin Hood but the setting seems to be in outer space. That's all I have for now, I could also take a look at the content, but I'm sorry it will be in a few days. Good luck.
WinterBud Okay, thanks for the advice. I'll try to change the cover to be more fitting.
The book cover is a bit off putting to say the least and the synopsis is written in English, but is a bit bland and boring. A little nitpick on your choice of words here, 'One day, many great beings of other races started a mass murder.' if i'm understanding correctly these other races are mass murdering another race and we have a much more elegant word for it called genocide. I would recommend using that word since its a much more powerful word and it truly conveys the actions you are trying to describe. Of course if you want to pad the word count and use as many words as possible then its up to you, but in my opinion quality is much more important than quantity in writing.
That's my review of your synopsis. 5.5/10 Knows how to use English to assemble sentences.
Positive_Lullaby Awesome, thanks for the advice. I did change the synopsis. Out of curiosity, did you have a chance to read a chapter or two?
FrozenSynapses No, i review only synopsis and if it passes my evaluation then i might skim over a few chapters.
