Hello, I'm a new 'writer' and I'm having a hard time with my novel. The reason might be because it has a low number of views (17.8K for 22 chaps) and this results in lacks of critics and opinions.

Why would I need that?
Simply to improve the areas in which the novel are lacking and make it more pleasurable for reading. So far I have a basic plot, however developing it from one plot point to another turns out to be a pain since I do not want to rush things.

Please give advice, opinions and even critics as I'd be happy for any of those.

https://m.webnovel.com/book/11966134905672605 (updated)

    Apophis9 changed the title to Dawn Of The Crimson Sun - comments [had to].
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