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Hi! So I'm a new author here at WN but I've already been writing in many platforms like Watt pad and the like. I'm always fond of leaving reviews and helping out fellow authors to encourage them to write more. I think it's important to be guided by the opinions of readers, and so I am offering to give reviews for free!

Just drop the following info. If the format is not followed, I will not open the link nor look for your book.
Author:
Title:
Genre:
Novel link:
Synopsis:

I promise to read and review the first three chapters of your book. Of course, I will add your book to my Library and will continue reading it if I like it.

Although not required, it is much appreciated if you check mine out also.

Author: Minyol
Title: Mr. System, I love you
Genre: Magical realism, Fantasy, Cultivation, Romance
Novel link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12630791806246305
Synopsis:
In the brink of death, Eva, a 16-year old orphan peasant in the Kingdom of S'alazar, was resigned to dying due to the cold in her mostly empty shack in the slums outside the border of the City of Maine, that is, until she heard a voice in her head that would change the course of her life, or the world for that matter.

Used to the grit needed to overcome the harshness of this world, but now equipped with a System (with a handsomely alluring voice) who filled the gaps of her human weaknesses, Eva easily grows in power and strength. Interestingly, she soon discovers that, not only does she now find in herself the desire to conquer the world with the ability to do so, but she is now also dead-set in conquering her System's heart.

I look forward to some great works!

minyol

Thank you for your kind offer :)

Author: qostoq
Title: The Sole Skull
Genre: Fantasy
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12401782806389305/The-Sole-Skull
Synopsis:

A group of people found themselves in an 'Elevator.' They didn't remember anything but their names.
None of them knew, but a giant labyrinth that filled with monsters was the first stop in their new lives.
A boy named Dante was among the amnesiacs. By chance, he obtained a weird Hidden Class called 'Skull,' and the legend began.
Join Dante as he clears the dungeon and finds his memory fragments inside of the monsters.

Author: ASlyDrake
Title: Resurgence of the Rogue Blacksmith
Genre: Reincarnation, Action, Game Elements (LitRPG)
Novel link: Click here
Synopsis:
Dazed and with a throbbing heart, Raphael Simon wakes up to find himself given a second chance.

His mistakes, his regrets, the things he never achieved or even thought about trying - all of these are now open to him once again, as he wakes up eleven years younger, at the very beginning of Origo, the VRMMORPG which he immersed himself in for a third of his previous life.

In the depths of a forest filled with vines and undergrowth, near a captivating waterfall is where his story begins anew - the story of Jiver Lefevre.

A Human, a Blacksmith, and a Rogue that threw away his daggers for two sturdy hammers.

Much appreciated, if there’s time, I will review yours too.

Author: Hyowha
Title: Rebirth of A broken demoness
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Psychological,
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/10500707705049205/Rebirth-of-a-broken-demoness.
Synopsis: The greatest swindler, while committing a heist, unfortunately died of an explosion and crossed over to another world.

In this world, he is the Dukes useless granddaughter and is immediately met with a broken engagement.
In this world, he's an incompetent 'miss' and a bastard with a family that wouldn’t mind killing him.
No matter how you looked at it, wasn’t it already [Story End]?

Still, now that he had transcended over, he had to live with only his wits and the ghost of the original body.

“Hmm, first let’s aim for world domination, shall we?”

Thank you.

Author: SkyHighzzz
Title: Divine Overlord
Genre: Action, Fantasy, Cultivation
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12363990006337805/Divine-Overlord
Synopsis:

A Man who standing at the peak of cultivation.
A Man who saves the entire realm from annihilation.
A Man who was called the peerless.
A Man who lives inside a cave.

This is the story of a Divine Overlord.

Descending back to the realm he saves after a long sleep.
What will he find ?.
Is it will be still the same realm as in the past ?.
Or will it be a whole new world filled with new adventure ?.

minyol oh and if its not too much trouble, I recently made a new book! I hope you will all check it out!

Author: So_mi (still meee)
Title: Bullet Through My Heart
Genre: Romance Fiction
Novel link: Here
Synopsis:
Katherine Janssen had no choice but to kill in order to save herself and her family. She has done this for fifteen years and she is willing to do it for another more. So when she received another assignment, she didn't think too much into it.

She knew what to do.

One bullet.
Straight through the heart.
No hesitations.

But then, she realized as she shot that bullet in that rainy day, she knew this mistake is going to 'bite' her up in the ass.

minyol I have currently three originals and one fan fic. But as for now, if you won't mind, I will love for you to make a review for my two originals.
Author: ChibaNaozumi
Title: Memory Fragments
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11515580706404605/Memory-Fragments
Synopsis: Dreams, memories – sometimes, I have those from a person I don’t recognize.
Sometimes, I wonder if my dreams and memories were real.
Do these memories are real or are they fake? I wonder that to myself.

The other one would be:
Author: ChibaNaozumi
Title: Death Flag
Genre: Magical Realism/sort of War
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11620255106444005/Death-Flag
Synopsis: The loud slashes, freezing wind.
All of it feels so heavy I think I might pass out.
No, I can’t! After all the sacrifices that were made, I won’t let anything left undone.

Those stories are already finished with the first volume and I am currently working for volume 2.

Hope you'll like it.

So_mi done! I left a review for your book. ;)
Inna's personality is so relatable. Lol.
I really advise you to find peers who can help you will proofreading. :) Your English is understandable, but it could be better.
Why do I feel like you'd be a great Manhwa manga author? haha

minyol aww thank you but sadly I can't draw as good huhu That's a dream i can never fulfill

Hi! if its not too much trouble would you review my novel? Thanks in advance and I will chek it out yours too.

Author: GabrielDetchans

Title: Witch Zanthia´s Little Shop of Horrors

Genre: Romance, Comedy, Shop Owner

Novel link:[links] https://www.webnovel.com/book/12386178405369505/Witch-Zanthia%C2%B4s-Little-Shop-of-Horrors

Synopsis:

n the Scarlet Empire´s Capital a mysterious shop has appeared. The store´s owner is the Witch Zhantia, a dreamy young woman who fantasizes about getting rich and meet the man or woman of her dreams. Maybe even both.

But it is not so easy to change Fate and force the wild currents of destinies to alter their course. Who knows what might happen in the end?

Fortunately she has some helpers: cool cats, a mysterious system and terrific nightmares. Fair warning: this story has a lots of little cute cats.

Romance-Comedy- Slice of Life -Supernatural-Mystery- Female Protagonist.

"Everyone dreams of something. If sometime in the past you were interested in the secrets of the Necronomicon or the Darkhold we have good news for you...

Or maybe you are the kind of lonely person that wanted a love filter to get a boyfriend or girlfriend but you did not know where to get one...

Also, if you ever needed desperate healing of a terrible incurable disease at a modicum price...

Or if you dreamed of acquiring a wandering horror to torment a mortal enemy that you hate to the end (or failing that, an annoying younger sister )...

Well, then you definitely came to the right place. The place where your dreams come true! (For a fair price, of course.)

Congratulations and welcome to the witch Zanthia´s little shop of horrors!

Just a friendly advice from us, do not grab the free candies ..."

Sales speech of the cats of the Scarlet Empire (approved by Little Sun, Shadow and Moon)

Please and thank you for the review, I hope my book doesn't disappoint.

Author: Swordfane
Title: Path of the Tyrant King
Genre: Cultivation
Novel Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12515675406710405/Path-of-the-Tyrant-King
Synopsis:

Long ago a boy was born to a powerful clan, he was on track to inherit his grandfather's mantle, but alas he fell in love with the wrong person.

What happened next was only karma, he was beaten and flogged to death by his kinsmen and with a single breath left he cursed them. He would return one day and leave no traces of this wretched clan. He then used a forbidden method to condense his essence into one.

This boy would become the highest demon under heaven, leaving a reign of terror that spanned eons. His evil heritage left an indelible mark upon history. But alas righteousness prevailed once again and the great demon was slain, eras passed and his mark all but disappeared.

A Blood Moon hangs as a forgotten corpse rises, the great demon returns once again!

This is great of you. I made a reply before this, but it's my last few chapters that I could use a review on so I deleted it. Thanks for offering though!

Thank you in advance :D

Author: FluffyKiller
Title: A Demon's Paradise
Genre: Romance Fiction, Cultivation
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11881242006585305/A-Demon's-Paradise
Synopsis: Moyin isn't a good person. Never has been. Even the people who she is closest to would say she is a maniac. However, when she winds up in the body of a dead slave girl in a world that isn't earth, she doesn't want to make trouble. All she wants to do is live out the rest of her extended lifetime doing what she loves and being left alone. But against her wishes, a certain shameless prince won't leave her alone and every time they meet he wants to snuggle up and get friendly. Although, most of the time, he isn't her biggest headache. It's the hypocritical fools that keep trying to kill her that really piss her off.

Most of the time

Thanks you for this.

Title: The Archaic Elements
Author: Vats
Genre: Magical Realism
Synopsis: In Avis Realm, Cultivators shatter the Shackles which bind their Mortal Soul from reaching the Divine. Ten shackles to Divinity remains the destination yet no one has ever succeeded in a thousand years.
In this world dominated by strength drifts a kid who has no idea of where his journey leads. Neither is he aware of the truth regarding his ORIGIN.
Azyl felt his world collapse when he heard his father cry out in pain. He didn't quite understand what his parents were saying, neither did he try to grasp what had happened. In his mind only one thought revolved as he could only think of one kind of a person. An Elementalist.
Only they had powers which could make a person writhe in pain for ten years. And he had aspired to become like them one day. But now all Dreams felt so far away. He didn't want to become someone like the person who hurt his father. Yet fate had other plots designed for him.

He was forced to enter the Elements Academy in West Cloud City, against all his wishes. He had made up his mind to never study Elemental arts.
Until he came face to face with the cruel reality of life.
A miracle encounter leads to him inadvertently going down a journey that he never could have imagine.
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12118348406949905/The-Archaic-Elements

Thanks for this, i just finished the prologue and would love to have some thoughts on the beginning of my story!

Author: SmarthLad
Title: The Universe is Innately Just
Genre: Futuristic setting, Cultivation, Magical Realism
Novel link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12563156406920305/The-Universe-is-Innately-Just
Synopsis:
In the 24th of December 2118, they came.

They came with knowledge, with technologies, and last but not the least, they came with change.

A fleet of unknown origin took upon Earth, with their only goal being the integration of Earth into a bigger world.

The reason? Earth finally reached its maturity. Humanity was no longer a young civilization.

In the middle of all this, Fell Pluck, a young 17 year old, saw this as an opportunity to change his destitute life in the city of New Casablanca.