anne_2 Review done. I strongly suggest you download and install Grammarly in your phone. It will help you a lot to check your work before posting. Also you need a new synopsis. I left a few some more advices in the comments. Your story is good but remember: presentation is everything! Keep up the good work!

@MishaK you are next

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@shrishthi
@fantasy_land
@NguyenDynasty

@great_gamer I missed your tag the first time. you still want to trade reviews?

ihateyounot did someone review your novel? if not, tag me and I wil read it.

        GabrielDetchans Hi! Thanks for asking. I’ve currently got two reviews (excluding my own) so if you’re free, do come and drop one~ if you plan on skimming through without reading all ~100 chapters, I’d recommend skipping straight to the second volume lol. Thanks :D

          @fantasy_land Thanks! I have read your up to chapter 26 and I gotta say I liked it very much! My recommendation to you would be to edit the first five chapters to fix a few silly grammar and spelling errors (
          Prolouge comes to my mind) and add a little more content to make them larger. You improved at very fast pace and by the last chapter I read (26) you were already doing a great job. I loved the siblings of both mc!

          @NguyenDynasty you are next

          @ihateyounot Then I will add you to my queue :D

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