Just a new writer passing by...
Do not self promote outside of monthly thread.
Seems the other swap-thread is petering out. I'm up for a review swap or five.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12652502605368205/Transition-and-Restart
Romance/Sci-Fi/high school/Tokyo
Any takers?
GabrielDetchans Okay, will hook you up tomorrow...
NEidarous Thanks for the review. Is it Perfect Strangers you want input on?
StenDuring
I have two book in the same series feel free to read whatever you want (Both I hope :D )
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12018411706763805/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Bennu-Effect
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12690952406647405/The-Infinite-Duo%3A-Perfect--Strangers
Hey, guys! I know this post isn't necessary, but I've found myself some time (finally) to read and review your promoted novels in this thread. Hopefully I can finish reading everything by today.
I'm here to beg for forgiveness for any harsh reviews that might come your way or comments that may offend you in any way possible. I'm a bit particular about grammar, which is funny, since my own work has a lot of flaws. But I've been learning English practically my whole life, so I can get pretty critical with it. I'm not good at writing my own stories but I've been told that I can be quite the harsh critic (sorry for my impertinence). I don't expect you to return the... favour? If that's what you can call it... so don't feel too pressured.
Do note that I'm a layman and thus my opinions does not matter. If possible, just ignore my reviews, please. ._.
Apologies in advance for any rude or harsh remarks that may go your way. Really, I'm sorry.
Thanks for recommending your works.
NEidarous Both queued.
ihateyounot I am interested in a review swap. Here's my link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/12757649906124705
Let me know.
ihateyounot As long as the feedback is constructive not destructive, that's all good. Constructive feedback is golden to an inspiring author.
There's also providing feedback on the the story itself for plot holes, character impressions, flow and so forth. You can have a story that is grammatically sound, but lacks on storytelling conventions and mechanisms. Usually, this is more important to a writer than picking out their grammar. Grammar can be eventually fixed in final draft stages.
MishaK I read and reviewed your novel already~
Veronica8 That's true, but I'm quite petty so grammar is the first thing I notice in any works. It's a bad habit of mine. //sigh// It's mostly because I don't have much talent in storytelling so I can't be helpful to anyone since I lack the creative capacity to give that kind of constructive feedback. Case in point: my own novel can't hold a candle to a lot of novels in this thread in terms of creative richness. Yes this is me shamelessly plugging my own novel huehueh
ihateyounot Thanks! Could you please send your link again...?
MishaK Sure! You don't really have to read it, though. But thanks, anyway~
ihateyounot I'm actual cool if someone points out my grammar flaws, since LanguageTool can only point out so much for me XD. I think you're selling yourself short. I've checked your novel and it's pretty solid. Keep writing it. :)
MishaK Sure, although my story is YA Fantasy, Action-Adventure with Shounen Ai, so I'm not sure if it would be your cup of tea considering the protagonist is gay. I'm happy for a swap review. Let me know what story you would like me to read. Zaldizko is the story I'd like reviewed.
Cheers :smile:
Shameless plug of my novels. I hope someone will try to read hehe. Thanks~ xoxo
Currently a new one for a the Enemies to Lovers writing contest
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12818121606527605/Remember-That-I-Love-You
And another one which has a very slow update. I will update it soon! I'm just sorting out the chapters lol.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/12244122606146005/Inevitably-Trapped-With-The-Amorous-Husband
Veronica8 Reviewed it and added to my library. Looking forward to more chapters. I like the fact that u wrote long chapters