ChessityFlames Thanks! But I can't find your book... Why have you deleted your chapters? As for the comments, it doesn't matter... let them come... it's important that you keep writing...

    yoursexypotato Yup. I'm seeing a pattern where readers have an opinion about a very fuzzy world, and what my characters look like definitely belongs there. I'll splice in minor expositions here and there to flesh out the setting (including facial expressions).

    Thanks for pointing it out.

    Jamison_C Sure! Can you leave a link for yours?

    I think I'd like someone to point out the flaws in my novel.

    Would you mind? :D

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