CailinMatthews im adding to shelf already, you got me at hidden identity
Review Swap :)
Luna1777 thank youuu
Ishita23 thank you. What about yours
withlovetale done with the review. Keep a good work
niharikabhol done with reviewing. I like your story. Keep up the good wiriting🖒
fantasy_land stillreading it. Please I may perhaps read it a little longer bevause of my exam amd stuff. I will review yours next week or in sunday 
please wait. I also want to enjoy the story. I don't want to rush it and judgeit rashly. I'll keep the book in my library now.
Always be sure to read 10 chapters of a story if there are 10 to read before you offer an opinion. Sadly reviewing a book on its opening chapter may not be a fair hearing of a story. Also be sure to offer something besides just "great story bruh.... 111111qq4ew." Be honest even if it's criticism being too nice does no one favors.
Luna1777 sure! Take your time. I will wait.
Ishita23
Hey guys,
It's another one of my novel. There are not many chapters yet and even the story hasn't taken it's original form yet but I want to ask for honest opinions. Note here I am not really asking for reviews but how you feel about the story because I'm kind of thinking of dropping it now. So here's the link
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/12870189705745405?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4304414066
Name: Everything Matters or Nothing Does
PeachyPearl I can't say much about it since I don't know what it's supposed to be about.
It might be nice to add more focus on the main character in her times of sorrow though. I barely saw much about it. One second she was sad, next she was fine. I know you described how her behavior changed from the observations of others but that's barely covering the surface of what she's going through. Adding more descriptive narratives may also help since these people can't read her mind. Like ummm... when a person's sad... does he/she stare off into space? Does he/she doodle scribbles on a notebook? When spoken to, does he/she answer in three words or less? Is his/her voice softer?
Hope this helps! If you don't feel like it anymore, it's okay to drop a story. If you think it only needs a bit of tinkering then, work on that. Since the story isn't solid yet, try to write an outline so you can assess if you want to keep it or not.
PeachyPearl ah... I just remembered she's supposed to be someone who can conceal her emotions. Then, it might work better if we get more of what's going through her mind then, compare it to what the people observe
CailinMatthews thanks for your thoughts. I can be more clear about a reader's aspects now. And as for why I haven't yet described what's going on in her mind is because it's packaged for the later chapters. Thanks again
When a person is sad he eats cake like so much cake and he reads sweet tender romance novels and cries lmao
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Luna1777 so very helpful. Thank you very much, i am going back to the drawing board and will put in more effort coz of your review. Thanks a lot
PeachyPearl your book is really good. Keep it up coz i am keeping up with it
CailinMatthews thank you so much for your review. You should be a critque, you are good at it. Thank you again and i am definitely keeping ur book in my collection.
Can i swap too?
Novel name: The Ruined World (TRW)
Synopsis: In a summer morning in the year 2020, was when it all started, the terror, later known as "The Darkness", few believed that this really would happen, for many were conspiracy theory, but when it really came, it took everyone from the most fanatical to the most discredited, but no matter how much people prepared, it wasn't enough for the terror that was to come.
fantasy_land sorry couldn't read your novel in the past few days but today when I did, I was just too happy for you made me reminisce that sweet bickering couple from IPKKND, Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Kumari Gupta. I love them and so did your awesome novel so far.
I may post a review once I finish half of the available chapters at least. Love you loads. Keep it up