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Orange_Rain I'm actually quite familiar with reviewing poetry on another site. You're not too bad and have an interesting voice, but it lacks a little in clarity or foundation of overall meaning spread across the poem. The ending third was the best.
purple_star Hard to review as it's one chapter. There's potential, but there's also a huge risk of being a cookie cutter story with the same story tropes. Good luck.
EmpressSK Also hard to review as it's one chapter. The perspective from the MC is your strongest point. It's ok if you can't get an editor as the writing is still understandable enough to follow the story. Also, be careful of romance story tropes, too, and put your own spin on them.