You have not provided a link to a review of yours...
Proper review swaps.
Acutelittletrap When you press on the following: links you will be forwarded to my work.
Sigheti I think she/he means a link to a review you did, rather than your novel.
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Oh no, I completely misunderstood, my apologies. I already reviewed forsaken123 novel. I didn’t mean to force you to read and review my work as well, I would understand if you refrained from doing so.
If you are unhappy with the review I gave please tell me, I will delete it.
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While this was not the depth, I was seeking you did make an effort.
I will reflect this effort soon. Thanks for the review =].
If possible, please remove your review. =]
Sigheti I left a review for you I hope it helps.
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/13384101405626605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4305357449
To assure winning in both sides, i will review who ever reviews me.
MisterE05 Hi I'd love to review your books, can you do mine.
Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY
Title: MAY.
Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.
Laughs.
"May, come back;"
"May, is it true your the daughter of..."
Silence
May breathing heavily.
Screams.
Laughs.
Sigheti Can I review yours as well, will you do mine.
Also, if you leave a review, I'll reciprocate and leave one for you, just reply your link and tell me that your interested.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13512655406123605/MAY
Title: MAY.
Synopsis: "May;" they call out her name.
Laughs.
"May, come back;"
"May, is it true your the daughter of..."
Silence
May breathing heavily.
Screams.
Laughs.
-_- The number of writers who clearly cannot read or do not desire to.
I could do a proper review, but I don't do copy/line -edits.
If you do something decent, I will repay your efforts. I do not do edits either those are comments I made.
Queued up. You certain you want me to run six chapters? It's about a third of what's needed for a proper assessment of the three big ones. Unless you're running at over 2k per chapter you'll probably ditch one in order to get your story started.
Waiting for a response before I go ahead since the low volume is likely to cost you a star or two.
Acutelittletrap Probably both unfortunately. I don’t know many that I could call the kind of detailed reviewers you’re looking for on this site. I would suggest myself, but on the other site you didn’t want a review, so I left comments (as you know already).
That reminds me, since you only asked for 11 chapters, you’re welcome to read/comment any 11 of mine. I forgot about clarifying that.
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Go for it. =]
If you are willing, tell me how you feel about the introspection. =]
Also if you can please point out a few places I can add imagery.
I went to give you your few comments, but because you have 3 novels. I did not one to pick one out randomly.
Send the one you wish for me to review, and I will start reading it. I look forward to working with you.
Chryiss
I can do that for you =]
I did not want a review swap. =] Mostly because they are a waste of time.
Sighe made an effort.
And I think perhaps you and Sten are they only ones who read my post. =]
Acutelittletrap Webnovel, although other places too, have a lot of lurkers. They read but don't say anything~ I too lurked once, still do.
I can give you an honest and detailed review if you want it. In fact, I earn some dollars by reviewing books for an independent website, so... Although if you were more specific as to what you are looking for, that would help.
Chryiss I get you, bro. I already have a decent number of visits, but only a single miserable comment...
A review or commentary like I did above would be awesome =].
If I am repeating a grammar mistake.
If and when I should add more imagery, and if I should, when would be the right time?
Also any good points so I can make sure to keep them in the future. =]
Anything that I cannot see or ask is often the best advice. Perhaps, the relationship between MC-FL is too cringe?
Perhaps I have too much introspection? Maybe my novel needs more action?
I need to expose myself to different viewpoints and see how my work presents itself.
Maybe it comes off as goofy when I want it to be serious etc.
Acutelittletrap hello there. I can do an honest review but it will take me sometime given I don't have too much of free time and also a book to write. So if you are patient enough, leave me your link. Thank you for your time.