If you are someone, who can be honest and not pandering. Please apply below.
Proper reviews take time and effort, which I respect.
Because of this, anyone who wishes to partake must link one of their own reviews. =}
Below is my review/commentary of the second chapter of I'm really a superstar.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TR98pxNfVDnhz9RGSr_uOLcr1FhTg8pc2LPOpa0ixyk/edit?usp=sharing
I point out a few good things and bad things because if I only point out bad things you may ignore the good parts of your writing if I do not. And, I point out the bad things because they may ruin your readers experience in enjoying the good things about your novel.
You can post a random review here, but unless I feel you do a good job. I will give a random 5-star review and move on, point out the first flaw I find in your novel and move on.
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13461875205891705/Reborn-in-Konohagakure