AnjGee Laurasiscoyote Daoist836587
Hi all, I just realized this thread doesn't say I no longer accept any offers due to time constraints (I thought it did, but I think I said it on another thread to reply to Carter's question). I'm struggling as is writing my own stories, so editing, which takes far longer than say a typical review swap, is no longer feasible for me.
I only messaged @FleetingClouds because I promised one a long time ago but life got to me. Better late than never, I keep my promises since he followed through on his review.
Anyway, in short, this thread is closed for review/editing trades.
Just a quick note for Daoist836587 since I read your brief introduction in your post. The grammar is mostly correct, so you have no major errors (just a small punctuation error in "rivers," comma which should be "rivers;" semicolon). The only thing I noted was the tone/style of writing. The vernacular is a bit grandiose, so for native English speakers, it sounds kinda funny like reading something theatrical and over-dramatized. This is mostly due to the "Here is" and the inserts with commas in "I...am reincarnated here!" But this isn't a big deal as it's understandable. :)