LIght_Novel_San Well that review came quicker than expected lol. I'll have yours up shortly~
Did you still want to do the comments on the chapters or no? Comments for me are usually "reactions" or thoughts of the chapter's event like what the typical reader might say.
I'm also curious by what you meant with British words? I don't recall any British words used except that I do switch the British and American versions of whether "toward" or "towards" is acceptable.
Glad you liked the rain prologue lol. Most people go Eh? at the chapter since it doesn't fully connect with the rest of the events and is very vague in its significance/meaning. Rain is very symbolic to the story though. As for MC's personality, what you said was insightful overall. I realized some days before that I made her inner thoughts and self too mysterious (on purpose), and when I rewrite I'll fix that, but for now, I'll be doing more introspection in future chapters.
BTW, the characters score doesn't match what was written in the review. I do want to know which one it is. XD