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Ch 650 TL Mistakes
650 "Out of Mo Wuji’s expectations" should be "Outside of Mo Wuji’s expectations" 'outside of expectation' is the common term
650 "he wasn;t even able to activate the spiritual energy within his body." there is a semicolon where an apostrophe should be "he wasn't even able to activate the spiritual energy within his body."
650 " If he spent too much time here, even an immortal would die of asphyxiation." The sentence order should be reversed. Otherwise the reader has the impression the sentence is about Mo Wuji "Even an immortal would die of asphyxiation If he spent too much time here."(edited)
650 "However, he was really shocked by this huge cauldron of Ling Lunan" should have a 's "However, he was really shocked by this huge cauldron of Ling Lunan's"
650 this sentence is wrong "If Da Huang was a true Grand Immortal Emperor, then it wouldn’t really better." Based on the sentences around this one it should be something about how Da Huang WOULD be able to fight Ling Lunan if he was a Grand Immortal Emperor.
650 " Ji Feiqian had clearly gave that equipment spirit instructions to give some benefits to the person that reached the top of the Heaven Seeking Staircase." should read " Ji Feiqian had clearly given that equipment spirit instructions to give some benefits to the person that reached the top of the Heaven Seeking Staircase."
650 " Not only didn’t that old man not give him anything, he needed to barter with that old man for some help." double/triple negative makes it confusing. Better as " Not only did that old man not give him anything, but he needed to barter with that old man for some help."