Guys please could I ask you to review my novel Discovering Evil.
Link : https://www.webnovel.com/book/13877972605909605
Title: Discovering evil
Magic is real.
There's a whole world of it.
Bren was a normal boy who happened to have some strange powers. Since he'd been born his parents and his Aunt had always kept him separate from other children but his 16th birthday was about to take a new turn...
On his 16th birthday, Bren learnt that he was one of the only people with the power to defeat the rising forces of evil and without him the world would plunge into eternal darkness and despair. But his foes are cunning and formidable. Monsieur Malevolent, the master of escaping death works for Omubi. It's a race against time for both sides. Will they succeed in ruling the world or will Bren foil their plans. Alongside Carlos and Nelly, Bren begins his quest to find the last of the chosen ones and finally bring peace on earth.
I'm new to writing and I've just begun my first novel so I'd like to ask you all to check it out and comment and write a review and if you really like it - I'm pushing my luck here - you could maybe vote. Please check out my novel. It doesn't start off that well but in my opinion I think it gets better as it progresses (that could just be my thoughts as the author.)