ShinSungmi Thank you! I will read your book tomorrow. Please give me time I request!! :D

      ShinSungmi Done with yours too!

      I would suggest describing the characters more as i have no idea how the main characters look like. It is still too early for me to judge the story but it is nice. And pleas do look up the comma splicing, might help you a lot! :D look it up to avoid it ahahaha xD I love how fresh, simple and light the book is but there are many things that you must take note of(grammar). Good luck author! Hope I did not get to your bad side T_T

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          Title : The Arks

          Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

          In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

            @VhielF Will start yours today... I had 2 reviews to give before you. I will start today..😁

              _Rain I've posted mine. Hope you finish all my chapters too before reviewing! :D

                @VhielF Ohh no I didn't.. Im sorry for the late review.. I didn't have net here for the past two days.. but I have done it now..
                Your story is great... Keep up the good work!

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