moleypotato I just finished reading your novel. I found it quite enjoyable and you have a good sense of character development. The full review is on the main page of your novel.

    Yeti_man heyy her is mine :D

    TITLE: The Summoned Kings
    LINK:https://www.webnovel.com/book/13872092906919505/The-Summoned-Kings
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    Synopsis:

    In the world of modern technology, Day and Night waged war against each other for thousands of years. With the stalemate leaning towards Night's favor, Day elected to choose a champion to fight for him.

    Day bestowed divine gifts to many students. They were sent to another world Day had created called Yamuna where they are to be tested by him through building their nations and fighting against each other to become the ultimate victor, his champions.

    The amiable devoted gamer, Toivo, was dragged into the competition against his will in a disadvantage. So it came as a shock to him to have been gifted the superior power, The Command System, where all others shall obey his every word. However, the force he has to fight against is belonging to a god wielding absolute power. Will his command be able to penetrate through his enemies strong will or will he fail?

        KENTARO12100
        Hey
        I read about six chapters of your book and as far as I understand, it seems you write in Spanish and then use Google translate to translate your work into English and then post it on webnovel.

        Well, dear a lot of your tenses do not match their corresponding verbs and some of the sentences completely change during the Machine Translation. 🤔

        Also, you don't use dialogue words such as said, replied, exclaimed etc which gives the story a feel if reading a script of a stage play 🤣

        The premise of your story is interesting and unique enough. I like it but I didn't leave a review on the review section of your story since it still needs to be edited a few times to flesh out the details and grammatical errors.🙂🙂🙂

        Though I have added the story in my library, whenever you finish editing it, ping me, I'll reread it and then give you a glowing review.

        All the very best for your future endeavours

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            Title : The Arks

            Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

            In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

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              Title : The Arks

              Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

              In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                Shiksha_Jerath Ok i rewrite the principal chapters 1-15 i think now can be read, i will correct the others in the week im to tired the begining of my story was a mess

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