Hi there, hope you don't mind if I leave comment pointers, since this is easier via paragraph comments. You don't need to review my story unless you want.

I gotta sleep since It's 01:00 AM now for me. I Will Review your Works when I wake up

    GleamInAbyss In that case, I had you rather read the second arc of the story than the first one. Since most of the reviews on the story are about the first arc.

    Would greatly appreciate your help 🙂

        Shiksha_Jerath

        I just finished reading the first 10 chaps, and had already posted a review since I didn't see your reply.

        It was fun reading the first 10 chaps, I would keep reading it if I have time to spare.

            GleamInAbyss It's all right. Don't fret over it.

            Also, I gave your work a read and left my thoughts in the comments as well the review section of your story. Hope it was helpful x

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                Title : The Arks

                Synopsis: After the Great Noble War across the galaxies had devastated the planets within, many were left scattered amongst the other stars. As the stars started to converge and planets collapsed, the Solar System was born. The only planet that was habitable for most species, Earth.

                In this universe, there are those that called themselves 'Mages', performing 'Magecraft'. Sort of like supernatural abilities. They harness the power of Elements. From Water to Fire Elements, Mages were being bred in all corners of the Universe.

                  Hey hi there. Can someone help me do review swaps?? Don't worry, you review mine, I review yours.

                  Title: The Mysteries of Chakra (Trial)
                  Link: https://webnovel.com/book/13916070905254305

                  Synopsis: This is the story of a prodigy. This is the story of Kiel, who wanted to change the world, because he didn’t want to change with the world, he who wanted to bring the world to its new era. Succeeding in his endeavor, he didn’t have time to celebrate, cause, bringing the world to a new era had a price to be paid; and for him the price was his life.

                  Satisfied his works, he thought he had died. But Karma gave him another choice. He was reborn in a world of mana, a place where magicians reigned supreme. Armed with the knowledge of his previous world, with his very new Chakra system, can he survive the world?? Can he live up to his name as a genius?? Join Kiel in his adventures and his pursuit of genuineness. Join Kiel as he unveils the mystery of his own body.

                  Note- If you are bored with all the regular trade off the mill novels, this is something that you want. GIve it a try. And if you like it, help this author grow.

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                    Rothfuss sure, tell me book name, I am on mobile, mine, The Next Defender

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