Rothfuss I just read like 500+ novels, so my expectations r just high. What I said was pure honesty, don't take it to heart that much though, every1 sucks at first, plus your story was mostly just grammercal stuff, as for the story plot, it might be good, it just doesn't fit my tastes though which is y I put 4 to be non biased, if u keep writing you'll improve, my first novel was god awful in everything, I never published it though, for my second I wrote with nk insperation and just a prize, other than grammer, everything else was pretty awful from a reader's perspective. You can usually judge your books qualities by these ratios (opion but what I can guess with my experience)
1-150:1 collection Amazing
151-250:1 collection Good
251-350:1 collection Above Average
351-450:1 collection Below Average
451+:1 collection Bad or horrible

This doesnt mean story itself is bad even if its 550:1, as most people get hooked at the start, and for me I just wasn't hooked as I read too many books, but thats also y I wrote a lot, I get reviews matter though so if u really want me to I'll edit it in future, but not listing things out, takes too much time

I don't really understand what u mean, but I hope this answers it

      KageMugen 113k views, honestly surprised its not rated yet whether good or bad. It'll prob be done tommorow don't have time tday.

          Eslyna let's just say I have neglected it for a year ... restarted 2 days ago ... Also started on a new one which now has 5 chapters and will probably put more focus on that one. The old one will have a completely new direction in a few chapters ...

              Here's mine: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14316549305962705
              Title: World of Darkness: Nirvana
              Genre: Magical Realism; Horror
              Synopsis:
              *A FanFic of the White Wolf video game Vampire: the Masquerade Bloodline.
              Chasing after a shadow from her past, Leona entered the world of the mystical blood-thirsty undead, but the awaiting danger is far greater than she could ever imagine: the grand game of politics, the battling sides of humanity and beast in their nature, and the brutal Jyhad in the modern nights...Lost and afraid in this chaos, she has to continue on this path--because there is no going back.
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              Mine is only 5 Chapters, though I have much greater length for each so it should meet your requirement XD Looking forward to an honest review. Random r-stars are just too boring :>

                Hi! So I'm kind of scared, kind of reluctant.

                So it does involve the entertainment industry and though it is in the romance section, it is not romance focused (for now.) For the first volume, I'm doing heavy character development on mostly the MC. I don't know what you meant by "FL" but I'm thinking female love or else, female protagonist. If you don't like female MCs, then this novel is invalid lolz.

                It has 1 review (Me cough) and (by inkstone) 18k words.

                I would really appreciate if you read the whole novel, but if you don't then please skip to chapter 23. I think I got better as I went along because I'm really bad at beginnings... However, I am proud of my spelling! My novel has no typos! (cough don't sue me if I don't)

                I'm not hoping for a 5 star review, but I am hoping for a 3 star review. I will party if you give me a 4, cuz that would be awfully surprising. I'm a new writer (barely started writing) that wanted to bring something new on the table. Please be patient as this is a very slow novel! :)

                Ok I've been writing for too long. pewpew sparkles

                Title: Not So Confident
                Genre: Romance/Realistic Fiction (I'm going back and forth)
                Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/13276920906343905/Not-So-Confident

                  Minitabs I did it finally, I couldn't say much thouvh as the story didntmatch my taste, I tried to be non-biased but I barely read mich so couldm't say much and probablly not the review u wanted, at least your book has a rating now though, generaly it looks good other than prologue, u neverwant to start prologues with hufe battle scenes or stuff similar to thaf

                      Eslyna

                      Yeah, then we're clear. I don't have any romance in my book right now anyways, but planning for a girlxboy.

                          Fine, I'll bite.

                          https://www.webnovel.com/book/12984272606303205/The-Taleweaver

                          Science fantasy. Finished 2003. Depending on how you define isekai this one might break the rules you set up. There's a huge gate connecting our (future) world with a fantasy one. You can pass it by means of space ships, so there's a live two way connection between the worlds.

                          Expect to find the occasional grammar error and absolutely horrible formatting since Webnovel doesn't support even the basics.

                          No funny litrpg crap or stuff like that. The main theme is what it means to be human.

                          It links into 'entertainment industry' and 'business' since the main character basically was the main event in the industry walking on two legs, which kind of translates into huge business. The secondary lead is a trader as well.

                            Btw, title is Impenetrable Dungeon, a fantasy story. Now have 30+chapters. Thanks!

                            Eslyna

                            Nopes, it was direct and correct. The novel is sixteen years old after all :D

                            It's copied and pasted directly from a digitally saved manuscript. You know, courier 12 and all that :D

                            Infodumping noted. I think I've evolved in that departement. Sceneshifts to the degree the entire experience feels disjointed is still a problem though.

                            Thanks for the checkup. It pretty much conforms with what I learned from writing those two books.

                                Eslyna LOL. Thanks for your honest review(wow, you were really detailed and I didn't expect it at all!) I didn't expect you to read so fast either. I hope I can edit my beginning chapters well because I knew I probably lost a lot of readers at the beginning but didn't really know how to fix it. I'll give you an update when I do! (ノ゜▽゜)

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