MAKKAPATI are you able to specify more? the plot is indeed good but it turns out bad when minor details aren't well done. i bet you know that.

MAKKAPATI A neuroscientist on earth who is also an anime and novel addict,he gets bored of his daily life and uses a method to transmigrate forcefully using science technology ad after transmigration,he enters a world of magic but his body don’t have much magic aptitude ,so he creates his own magic theory using science tech

So, a bone stock isekai story, then?

and there are many twists in story later on

"And then draw the rest of the f@#$ing owl"

    Tomoyuki I did think the premise sounded awfully familiar...

    😄 Haha, I agree. Perhaps it is a bit similar to the novel "Warlock Of The Magus World" that was already completed, albeit with a twist added by MAKKAPATI. But nevertheless, I'll read the story if a user creates one.

      GhostyGodZ I'm stalking you greedy worm because your greed is fucking endless. Did you already buy a sex doll with your patreon readers you virgin? You must be so proud. If possible I wished that sex doll STD and you learned you aren't different from scammers out there.

        Sunflower ...you do know he/she is being sarcastic, right? He/she is just making fun of Makkapati and trolling the guy. I mean, what kind of person just goes and asks people to write his/her idea for free?

          MAKKAPATI
          To be perfectly honest, it may be rude, but I don't really find the little "summary" of the story attractive. I know it's only a brief summary, but I'll explain anyway; I'm not here to be mean or anything, so please don't trash-talk x)

          So, for the MC, being a neuroscientist makes him an intelligent and very busy person. It's a passionate profession, an explorer of the human being (BAC +8). So being addicted to two things next door is almost impossible. But making him a person who occupies his little free time with reading and/or animes, I agree. I have more of a feeling that you're trying to make the MC a character that looks like an otaku, because you know it can be successful, but being otaku and neuroscientist don't really fit together. The best thing is to assume your originality and make him a character in his own right and not a character in which everyone can identify themselves.
          I'm not going to give my opinion on transmigration/reincarnation and the Isekais are genres, and I like them, you just have to know how to manage it.

          Then, used scientific "technology" to transmigrate to another world.... that not really related to the work of the MC. He is a neuroscientist, trying to understand how the brain works, for example, he studies the brains of people with Alzheimer's or schizophrenia and studies the results to better understand these mental illnesses. There's nothing technological about that. So from then on, the story will already start to make no sense, especially since I don't see, even if there were access to this technology, how he could use the machines without knowing them and even less on his own. And the fact that he wants to leave his world because he's annoyed just seems to me to be a facility for the story to begin. I'm sure you can find something interesting, for example, he's a scientist, so he likes discoveries, right?

          The fact that there is no magic capacity is something that has already been seen but that remains interesting, if he develops his magic it's even better. But how does he manage to bring all the technological equipment from Earth? It's not like he's going to get the whole thing delivered.

          I have the impression that you just had an idea and wrote it here without doing any research, which isn't the best thing. Of course you can find someone to write this story, but it's not up to the person who will write to create the whole script and fill in the gaps and problems in the script. Everyone has to do their part.
          If you ever make that effort and work again, I maybe I able to write this story.

          I hope at least I helped you :)

            I mean...you guys could just write your own stories, right? Why are you volunteering to write a story using someone else's idea? I can tell you it's not going to end well. You'll end up doing most of the work, he gets credit for doing next to nothing except conceiving an idea that, honestly speaking, any of us can randomly come up with, and you'll probably have creative conflicts (this wasn't what I envisioned!). Plus you're investing an awful amount of time, effort and energy into writing someone else's story...for free. Think about that before jumping into a project like this. Writing is not an easy task, and it's not as simple as taking someone else's idea and turning it into words. Badly executed, it will just turn out...terrible.

            I'm not telling you guys what to do, so if you want to volunteer, go ahead. But just keep in mind some friendly advice, okay? And again, I would like to remind you that such projects never turn out well, and I'm speaking from experience.

              Brainr0t
              First of all I never said MC is an otaku,mc is a anime and manga addict in much better sense he is an fantasy addict,and he like doing research and trying new things that’s why he was in Alzheimer’s research team and
              Second- lemme tell you maybe you don’t know this medicine and physics are interlinked (MRI,CT)
              Like those machines,so he takes help form his friend and uses that tech to send deep space signals just like the space organisations send,but with his memory and including all blue prints.
              Third-i did think a lot before asking people here,and for your information if you wonder it’s the same as all stories think about this,

              He sent signal in all directions,so why should only one person receive the memory?

                Woebegone

                Hell no,not at all like that story .
                I am using a small logic here,why should there be only one person who gets memory form earth,when he sent signals in all directions.
                There could be two or three or an entire space station receiving that signal right?

                  Tomoyuki
                  For your information,I just want someone to write the novel in their name only if they like the story,I am not expecting my name to be on novel,I just had a story in mind and don’t have time to write so if anyone have has hobby of writing novels and need good story I could give them mine.
                  And I am also a fantasy addict ,I like reading and watching all fantasy stuff,so I want to see how it will be if my story is written that’s all

                    Brainr0t
                    Since you are asking how he can bring technology from earth,i Didn’t mention in summary so there won’t be spoiler stuff,
                    He sends earth technology blue prints and his memory together

                      MAKKAPATI Uh, if someone has a hobby of writing novels, why should they write your idea instead of their own?

                      I don't have the time to write either, but I force myself to set aside some time to write. I might be the most terrible writer in the world, but I'm not going to ask other people to write for me without asking for anything in return. And I can assure you, the moment you give your idea to someone else and ask them to write a story based on it, it will no longer become "your" story. And if you do want to read something like that, you can go read Warlock of the Magus World or Scientific Magic (not sure if that one is still around), and best of all Release That Witch!. There are also a few Japanese light novels and manga that revolve around a reincarnated dude using science and/or physics to create his own magic system (I can't remember the title, I'll have to search for it but the translators stopped translating it). We already have people writing stories about people using their own magic theory with science and technology from Earth. Your idea is not new or original.

                        Before you ask me questions on how he transmigrate read the first few chapters I wrote ,I am bad at writing so don’t comment in grammar
                        Novel name - Forced Transmigration

                          MAKKAPATI So he's a neuroscientist/engineer/otaku hybrid who somehow mastered neurology, engineering, is capable of constructing and building his own machines, yet still has time to indulge in his otaku hobbies?

                          So...basically like every Mary Sue protagonist ever?

                          You might as well go read that Japanese web novel about some programmer dude who got reincarnated into a fantasy world, and designed his own magic with programming codes. At this moment, there's nothing to differentiate your story from quite a few of the tech-magic isekai stories floating around. There's quite a few on the manga aggregator sites if you know where to look, and often they devolve into the protagonist being a know-it-all Mary Sue that "revolutionizes" the world, which is pretty obnoxious to me, so I drop them after a while. That's why I can't remember the titles, or I would have listed them all for you.

                          Tomoyuki

                          Dude,I think you have some disorder.i never said my idea is original ,I never said my idea is new.
                          I just said if anyone is interested to write,I am not demanding here,and your saying why should they write mine when they can write their own?have some sense,I will First tell them the whole plot outline and if they are interested they will take up and write with their name as author,I can’t add all the minor details in plot.
                          And it no longer become my story for god’s sake I don’t care buddy ,I am not even asking to put my name on story page.
                          And for your information,I read all those novels already.

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