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Hey there.

I've kind of been stuck at my story, been away from it for a while but I am currently thinking of continuing with it and finally finishing it. I am close to the end but the last chapter left me feeling barren of ideas.

I would appreciate a more objective review of the story as it might get the inspiration juices flowing and help me decide whether to modify the story some way or just continue with the previous plan.

The book is called Dandelion Lover and has 38 chapters currently published.

Here is the synopsis for it:

Kate Ross is a slightly awkward young adult that has problems fitting into the norms of society. Her friends are all married and even with children while she is still struggling to find the right job. One day her luck changes when she is hired to work as a copywriter for a small company.

Meeting new people and making new friends becomes easy when she joins the workforce, but when her care towards her boss becomes more than she could allow herself, her once quiet life becomes filled with struggles to keep her own feelings under control.

Whether she falls prey to her feelings or she manages to fight against them, one thing is for sure, life is never as easy as it seems and it is up to her to face her own weaknesses or to stand up and fight for what she wants.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/11776550106516605/Dandelion-Lover

Genre: Romance

Thanks for reading!

LoneStar

Looking for a good fantasy story to read. I'll check yours out. No need for a review swap but if you'd like to I'm cool with it too.

Here's mine:

Title: The Foolhardies
Genre: Fantasy
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14616721006028805

Title :Four Hearts Of Love
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/14667118605233605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4307283714

Help each other revjew and comment it guys

GD_Cruz I'd be happy to give you a review swap. I just need to finish reading another and I'll start reading yours.

LoneStar Sure. I'm in the same boat but I should be able to get to yours by tomorrow. :D From the title alone, I feel like it's going to be enjoying it.

LoneStar

LoneStar Hi. I love your world so far. I audiobooked up to the start of chapter 11 and from the title alone, I kind of felt bad that my car ride which is where I love to audiobook wasn't slower. So if you're doing daily chapters then yey!

Also, I wrote you a genuine review (I think you can tell that I'm fanboying) as it was that good. I'm not sure if you wanted one but I did it anyway. Respect. The story is good. The world building is even better. Shades of a much wilder and more interesting version of Jupiter Ascending really.

Cheers!

GD_Cruz Thank you very much for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. I look forward to reading your novel today.

Woah! This post recieved 20 novel request for reviewing within two days! Lightning speed

PoeticPenguin Genere: Teen
https://m.webnovel.com/book/the-night-camp_23584883605485405 here is the link