i have made it my aim to help improve the quality of novels here. And so I am offering reviews. I'll read your novel at least up to the 20th chapter and will leave a comprehensive review. Please be warned that I will be tough and I apologize in advance for the stories I would rate low. Don't worry though I will add 1 whole star as consideration (this is Webnovel after all where authors usually don't do outlines and self-fulfillment novels are prevalent) and the stability of updates will automatically be 5 stars. I will also give suggestions on what to improve.

    I'm in, here's my novel Duality.

    The beginning is a bit rough, as it's my first time writing. Preferably, I'd ask to begin from Chapter 17 - Defeated as I changed my writing style starting with this one.

    From this chapter onwards is a flashback from the MC's mother POV, so you'll be able to understand it even without reading the previous chapters.

      JuneChristina A tree! Oh no, this is such an oversight. I only write to improve my English vocabulary and overall grammar, and still I made such a mistake. Honestly, thank you for spotting it. I shall alter my cover right away.

        Alright I'll review all the novels listed here. But it will probably take a long time for me to do the last one. As of writing this, I have reviewed the topmost two novels.

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