Novel Title: Beyond the RIft
I would really appreciate any sort of feedback...
Synopsis: What if you were forced to enter a Rift that gave you superpowers but also turned you into a monster?

After a Calamity that took out a quarter of the Human population, Humanity stood back up, stronger than ever before, and conquered the source of the Calamity.
A few centuries later, in a world governed by Superpowers, Ragnar has lived an adventurous life. From loosing his parents at 7, to serving as an enslaved Assassin till he turned 18, not a single moment had gone by where Ragnar felt bored.
Now that he is 18, he escapes the fate of slavery, only to find out his path ahead had already been decided for him. He does not have the right to choose.

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    Hello, here's a novel I'm working on. Would really appreciate the feedback.

    Synopsis: The young Blake Alderwolf decides to join the fight against the daemon, the monstrous entities that have been reigning terror on mankind all over the world, unaware that he, alongside everyone else are just marionettes in an individual's grand plan.

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/he'stheone_22876511706959005

      This novel is my baby. My first novel tbh.
      Title:HesTheOne
      genre:romance mostly

      synopsis:Kaia Crestfall is the youngest CEO of Crestfall Industries, a leading business in the entertainment world. But despite being capable of such a high position, she still needs to constantly watch her back. Especially with a fiance who has ulterior motivesā€¦

      One day, after calling her mom to call off the engagement for the umpteenth time, she almost gets run over by a car. Narrowly escaping death, she is pulled into the arms of the last person she expected to meet. The one person who had broken her heart...the one person who will brighten her world...the one person she should never be withā€¦ Why? Because heā€™s her enemy. But for some reason, while she is stunned by the man in front of her, he tells her, ā€œMarry meā€¦ā€

      End: Cliche synopsis plot (only as a set-up for the rest of the story!!!)
      Start: The storyline after they get together

      Despite many hidden secrets along the way, the secret relationship between her and the love of her lifeā€”Alexander Saborā€”continues to grow. But as fate may have it, due to a dangerous man playing a dirty trick behind the scenes she is once again torn away from Alex. This time not of a broken heart from betrayal, but one of love and endurance.

      As you read, get ready for some cute and heartwarming, as well as some heartbreaking scenes. But a good story will always have its heart-wrenching twists and turns!

        Please review, comment and collect my book
        Title: After nine years
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        "I would treat you more than I would to my heart. There's nothing, there's no one that can get close to replacing you in my heart.
        I love you and I'll never stop loving you."

        Scarlett Chevalier, the precious princess to her father, became enemies with him when she discovers he's cheating on her mother with her mother's bestfriend.
        She grows up to be a powerful, vengeful young lady, seeking the downfall of her father and any man that blocks her way.
        But she would need to find a man that can take care of her and treat her like his own princess.
        Read after nine years to find out!

        Cover credit: Fire_wolf27

          luwanipixie
          Hi... In case you're interested in reading a Female Lead Fun Fantasy Adventure Story, please give the book of my friend a read.

          ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
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          Thanks a lot!!!

              Hi, Iā€™m a new author and Iā€™m looking for some constructive feedback on my novel. Itā€™s called ā€œMystery in the Whispering Groveā€ and itā€™s a fantasy novel with a hint of adventure, action, mystery, and romance.
              Itā€™s about Aria and Theo, two chosen Keepers who have to master the elemental powers of Earth, Air, Water, and Fire to protect the ancient Whispering Grove from a dark threat. Along the way, they discover the secrets of light and shadow, truth and illusion, and their own destiny.
              If you enjoy stories with magic, mystery, and some adventure, youā€™ll love this novel. And if you donā€™t, Iā€™d still value your opinion on how I can improve my writing style and craft a better story.
              You can read my novel here:
              https://www.webnovel.com/book/mystery-of-the-whispering-grove_27706412300716305

              Please read it and let me know what you think.
              Thank you for your time and support. I look forward to hearing from you soon. šŸ˜Š

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