Hey Guys I have started Writing a book for the first time but so far have not gotten a review and I was hoping for some form of Feedback so as to let me know what I am doing right and what is being done wrong.
Any form of Feedback will be highly appreciated Thank You!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/14376214406229405/The-Soldier-Turned-Hero.
Synopsis
Colonel Shepherd was in the midst of a mission while He was covering the retreat of his comrades that's when he was hit by a stray bullet and died or He should have but he awakened in another world and the first sentence that he heard was "All Hail The Hero"!!
This is the story of a Soldier Turned Hero!