The_Canary
nalimutan mo na ko.
Need review of my novel :) I can do swap review also
The_Canary Who didn't got doozy by the magical jargon and complex system of that LN MKR?
It's even more complicated than that of Fate series' (-_-')
Anyways, good luck with the readers. You're gonna find a lot of them in here.
I, for one, am a fan of the genre, but due to the amount of animes that were released (more like, unleashed) these days, and how they turn out in the end.
It's simply became a downer when too many of them turn out typical and dull, like an over-chewed gum (-__-)
That's why I simply divert most of my attention on western fantasy and animes with good plots, to keep myself motivated and thinking about new ideas. Listening to music while I'm writing my story helps me a lot as well. It's very relaxing when you which direction you're going... (_)
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glaurunglives Haha, yo G! We're just talking. You know, bonding, making friends. The works! :D
How are you today, my friend? :)
glaurunglives sorry I was taking my time reading your story from the start. :(
So I skipped on Chapter 51! Done posting my review also :)
Now I'm curious on that staff! I'll go back reading from previous chapters hehehe.
The_Canary G's story is good, eh?
It gave me the western fantasy and Tolkien vibes when I read it. It was nostalgic for me! (_)
Regius_Sanguis it also reminds me of some Forgotten Realms books I read before, especially Drizzt!
The_Canary Forgotten Realms? Is that good?
Regius_Sanguis you have to choose. Since there are a lot of books under Forgotten Realms. I think this is part of D&D franchise. But I read Drizzt series. He's a dark elf/drow
Would you like to give mine a try? I've been writing it very much like an anime-like WN.
The_Canary Oh, thanks for the clarification. I'll be sure to check that out when I have the time! 
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Hello, kaz!
Sure, I'll do a review swap with you.
It might take me some time if there are a lot of chapter though. Is that ok?
Oh, and here is mine:
Regius_Sanguis
Sure, that's ok. I hope you enjoy it. It's fine even if you lose the urge to review, as I care more about what people think and what they like/dislike, so be sure to leave me comments.
I'll take a look at yours. Seems like a FF15/anime hybrid fanfic?
Yup. I made a decision to go against the norm of fan-fiction. Like creating my own MC and putting him in a different world.
He's going to be OP in future, and be warned. I made the chapter long because I stylized it after western fantasy novrls. So, heads up.
Content - in my opinion 4-5 stars.
Text - from 3 stars. Bad English, grammatical errors.
Pros, thanks to the advice of the reviewer, he began to use the humor thesaurus, it seems the text has come to life a little. Before pouring chapters, double-check once. This is the text.
In content, new methods, knowing where to look for treasures are interesting.
I need advice on improving the novel.
Read chapters 1 through 4. Iām rewriting it now, I began to rewrite chapter 5. It has already taken 7 hours. Still need at least 2 hours.
If I did not give you a review, then I will write, if I did, I can write 5-6 comments on the chapters.
my romance - https://www.webnovel.com/book/15195393805364505/The-Adventures-of-Treasure-Hunters
Noted. I'm still going through it right now, but so far, it's engaging! :)
I'll take a look at yours after my work day ends.
kazesenken It's okay. You can take your time. I'm still reading yours, actually :)
As I said before, don't be rushed to leave a review (you don't actually have to leave one if you don't want to). I would rather you take your time and enjoy the story and let me know your thoughts.
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I am, and honestly, I'm liking the story so far. Every time I finish a chapter, I leave a comment, so it might take me a while to finish the story and then review. I might have to continue this tomorrow if I don't finish reading it today.
I added it into my library, just in case :)
Thrilled that you like it enough to binge it. I'm currently staring hopelessly at slides as I work on a presentation that I have to make for work tomorrow.