Clowniac read this outloud to yourself and you'll realize that this is actually you😂

      Lilliny they said those who are cringe tend to tell others that they are ..so🐩

          Clowniac You're really funny, all this shit things some shithead over here are saying ain't getting to me and I just classified you as one😅

              Lilliny hmm. You want to report a book which webnovel has already read and contracted, you're very funny.

              And reading a chepter over and over again only proves one thing (**) 😂

                  Clowniac it started with a Pussy, glad to know that you checked it out, whether out of spike or whatever, you still did so😂😅

                      Gem4Life This dude is funny, I said change it (in your mind) and I can make them have sex at chapter one because it's my book! Mine😋

                          Gem4Life for someone who said the story is rapey and the Emperor only cares about sex ..you sure can tell the truth in a review.

                              Well, this shaped up into an absolute shitshow. Imma just go ahead and see myself out

                              I'm just going to leave this out here. I haven't commented hardly at all about this so far, cause I've been fairly neutral. But if anyone normal person like me that has stumbled upon this, they will likely think twice before reading any of your works ever again, OJ. This is not the way you treat people. Just keep that in mind.

                              Ramiro_Barrera Well, I do not chase the rating. I write raw materials. I have six short stories. But now I began to rewrite one. In my opinion, both the content and the text have become better. But this reduces the performance of updates.

                              At the expense of the editor, he needs to pay, as well as the corrector! I don’t have money, I didn’t conclude a contract. And who will work for free? A maximum of 5-6 chapters will be watched.

                              I objectively evaluate my content with 5 stars, but the quality of the text, the presence of grammatical errors, the difficulty of understanding the text the first time, this gives the text 2 stars. To be honest and honest with ourselves.
                              And so the overall rating is somewhere around 3 stars.

                              If I write a novel to the end, if it will be interesting to readers. Then it can be rewritten, by then it is possible either my English will become better, or I can earn a little more money and I can afford either a translator or an editor.

                              But thanks for your honest opinion, it is expensive. Honesty is the best thing about people when communicating.

                                  It’s easy to scold, you don’t need a big mind. But if a person cannot restrain himself in public, this indicates his weakness. Since politeness in communication is an art for real writers. As for your work, after such a strange and inadequate criticism, I don’t have any interest in reading any of your work.

                                  But this world is not so simple, an evil word will return as a boomerang, bad deeds fall on karma.

                                  Well, here everyone chooses his own path of Light Tao or Dark. It is your choice and you are not the victim of your choice.

                                  OJROMANCE Of course I'm right and I have the right to express my opinion even without swear words. that’s the difference. you don’t know how to conduct a discussion, therefore you get negative reviews. what I was convinced communicating with you.

                                    OJROMANCE you are being so f-ing rediculus. You come into another person's forum, and start attacking LITERALLY everyone. How is this in anyway logical. If you had just come at me, no one would have come at you like this, but since you targeted everyone, with your toxic BS. At this point YOU brought this *ish on yourself. First by giving your book name, 2nd by posting those "negative" reviews and most importantly, by attacking everyone who even questions you. Clearly you are a child who has not yet learned the proper way to hold a discussion

                                        Gourmet_DAO
                                        From reading one of your novels, I do see the common issues of grammar and flow that plague a lot of ESL writers. However, I sense a peculiar style of writing that is unique, despite the flaws. I kind of envision a voice of a sage telling detailed stories but sometimes losing themselves in the process. I hope you can find someone that can work with you to polish it.

                                            Gourmet_DAO I think, I can certainly help in suggesting some edits. Do drop by the link of your story that you're looking forward to edit. I'll try to take a look the soonest I can manage.

                                            Do continue to write irrespective of anything and everything. Nobody is perfect. We make mistakes. We learn. We improve and I believe - that matters.

                                            Cheers.

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