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I'm just here for the :tea:

Gem4Life you did the right thing. The author shouldn't have deleted it since a story with only positive opinion is too suspicious. Also if it contained useful tips and author actually changed those bad parts then it shows that he/she is growing and willing to grow.

Also peoole really need to stop being snowflakes.

Heh. I don't see a problem with a sex-scene ten chapters in (provided we're talking healthy sex). From a pacing point of view it would probably be better to start off with the sex-scene rather than wait ten chapters (if you want to have the juicy parts that early at all), but that's just a personal preference of mine.

There are several reasons for an early scene of that type. The character is sleeping around, or both characters are already in an intimate relationship from the start, or the story is about a character who wants the episode forgotten for different reasons.

Well, my ten cents.

For example, they wrote a swap review to me, and then for some reason the review author himself deleted it. I was unpleasant. Why did he remove it? I gave him two honest reviews of 4 and 5 stars, why did he delete his 4.2 stars? I do not understand. But I did not go to him and did not delete my reviews. This is too shallow. But now I see his work, just do not give him feedback. If you want to delete a review, you can first name the reason for the author and then delete it. And then, so quietly erase everything, causes at least surprise and not understanding why?

I am sorry my English is not so good, I hope you will understand what I was talking about.

Gourmet_DAO I think I do. That is sad that he did that. I'm sorry

Aysel_Inara This is the book he's talking about.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/13423591905759305/The-Virgin-Outcast-Who-Stole-The-Emperor's-Heart

OJROMANCE It’s hard to understand who is right and who is to blame. The offended reviewer, who is constantly removed, or the author, who has his own view on the novel. To understand this you need to read at least 51 chapters ?! You are joking?! Especially if this is not your favorite genre? On the other hand, it is possible both the author and the reviewer, thus engaged in the promotion of the novel. Since it is usually not accepted by network ethics to indicate the author of a work, as this violates the rules for using the site. And then it turns out some kind of black PR, which spins the novel to be read and given feedback? I may be wrong in this, but to read chapter 51 of a genre that I don’t like, I'm sorry but I don’t want to read it. Since I have more interesting novels in those genres that I like, in particular about DAO, the path of enlightenment, history, fiction of reality.

The author can only wish strength and search for those who like this genre, who are ready to read at least 51 chapters in order to understand who is right and who is not.

OJROMANCE

1. Dont @ me for something I don't have any involvement with. It's bad form.

2. You dont owe us an explanation. You said it so yourself in your response.

3. Your response is making you look so much worse than the OP did. I understand your goal is protecting your honor, but you're only serving to make yourself look childish.

OJROMANCE sorry, but that is not true and it did not tell me any of that. Please pull up the messages that you sent to me. I never lied in my post I stated my opinion as I told you SEVERAL times, so while you are hear making false claims. Also I never said he raped her, sso where that came from is behind me. I have a right to write this post as well as a review on a story I did not like.

OJROMANCE
You're cringe.

I can sti view the messages that she deleted, but I can't view my response. If anyone knows how to paste them here please let me know. Thing is, I was already over this, but since you want to slander me thrn that's not okay. I never said your name not your novel. I get it, you would be mad, but so am I. What I don't like is you lying on me. If you want to combat anything I said at least be truthful in it. Also I even said in this post that no rape actually happened, so maybe you're the one who needs to actually read *ish before you come at someone side ways. I have always come to you with respect, so for you to sit here and lie on me after you have deleted the original review is sick. Go get your head fixed

OJROMANCE Mind yourself readers and google constructive criticism

Here's one back- mind yourself, writer, and Google basic communication skills.

And since we are clarifying ish, your right I do not know if they ended up having sex, but from where I stopped at they sure as sht we're heading there. And add on to it, YOUR own warning about explicit content and I was too put off to read anymore of it. That may have been the final straw but that was by no means the only issue I had with that book. And if you had properly read my review you would have known that. But you were more concerned with getting me to change it, than anything else.

Tomoyuki Wouldn't that be just a big spoiler?
BTW in my review i just told people that might not believe me to just check some chapter comments And/Or even better to actually read the thing.

No need to have the review deleted.

xcares Um, I think you'll find the purpose of the review is to help people decide whether they should read the story or not, not tell them to read the story and decide for themselves. And if you're worried about spoiler, use spoiler tag. Otherwise the review isn't going to help much. You need to elaborate why you think the story is good/bad or warn people what's in it or tell people why it's worth reading, not just leave a single vague sentence and tell people to find out for themselves.

What you consider "stupid" or "moronic" isn't necessarily what others consider stupid. Elaborate why you think the main character is stupid (use spoiler tags if necessary) and leave it to the readers whether they agree or disagree with your definition of stupid (and I don't mean them reading the actual story).

It's like an Amazon review, people go onto Amazon to check if the quality of the product they are considering to buy is worth the purchase or not. Just saying the product is poor without explaining why isn't helpful. People want to know why they shouldn't spend their money on the product, or in this case, why they shouldn't invest their time in reading. And vague reviews that don't actually give details or explain the statements/claims they make aren't something you can take seriously, because as I said, sometimes the insults and "criticisms" are childish rather than justified. You need to justify why you think it's bad/stupid, otherwise it comes away as little more than whining, and you might as well complain about it in the chapter comments than write a review, that quite frankly, doesn't serve the purpose of a review.