Trying to promote my novel on here and will gladly review anything anyone else puts up within reason. My novel will ALWAYS be 100% free, no stones, coins, passes, souls, gremlins, or whatever they make their currency needed!

The Alterra Project (3rd volume nearing completion, new cover coming soon!)

https://www.webnovel.com/book/14243270606809705/41870331941538614

Synopsis: A hundred years from now the Earth is now reduced to several domed cities after the last war raised the temperature across the planet thus raising the sea level.

The most common escape for everyone is virtual reality. A new game, Alterra Online, is set to release and promises to be the most realistic mecha/military/political simulation to date as well as the first full dive virtual reality game.

Gray Wilhelm, like so many others, wants to be one of the first to play. What is Alterra Online's secret? Why do players feel more alive in the game than in real life? And why is the government and Alterra Corporation working on it together?

Features:
- NO Systems, Reincarnations, Supernatural Powers, harems, or brain dead females that chase after MC.
- Monty Python references and many others.
- Believable characters

    LordSputnik I will put your novel in my library and give it a read and a review... the Monty Python sold it for me 👍

        stella2138 I'll need a little more than 1 chapter to go on, can't say I can give it a good review with just one short chapter.

        One thing I did notice is that your page structure is still the same, short sentence, next line, short sentence, next line, short sentence, next line, etc. etc. Do you have Discord or Line? I might be able to help you a little bit better through there if you wish.

            RedSonia Done, a little hard to review with only 7 chapters and it isn't my typical genre, but you are off to a very good start!

              LordSputnik actually i'm transferring it. i wrote it as galaxiana but lost access to the account so i decided to transfer it slowly. the real name of the book is FORGIVE ME, MY LOVE. you can decide to read it on webnovel and then give your review on married me again wife. thanks. as for discord,i hardly talk there. I talk through the forum so after reading please lecture me here. i know my grammar is bad too but I'm really working on it. kisses and goodnight.

                  Abdirah101 Thanks! I'm actually trying to rewrite the first volume little by little as I went WAY overboard on references early on. I learned my lesson thankfully.

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