Zyanide100 just finished giving your story a review. it was so good, thanks author
February 2020: Promote Your Novels Here/Review Swap
Shameless Promotion.
Not a story, maybe like a column.
Zyanide100 Absolutely! this is the link for my novel
https://www.webnovel.com/book/15767689506007905/MAZE---The-endless-Quest
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ZephyrIsMe
Ah, thanks for reviewing. Going to start your story right now. I'll review it as soon as I catch up.
Lamorakon_G Perizou
OKay then, I'll get to your stories shortly. Hope you like mine!
ZephyrIsMe Sure, it would be my pleasure. Do you need the link to my story, or do you have that down?
Lamorakon_G I don't have it can you send it again
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don't worry. I found it.
Here is my novel's link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16085497505850005
Lamorakon_G Review for your story Nidhoggr from me is done. Waiting for yours :)
ZephyrIsMe I've given you a review as well. If there is anything you'd like to ask about the review, ask away!
@ZephyrIsMe
I have a review for your story. It has potential, just a couple of things need to be improved on and it could become a really awesome novel.
Please read the reply I added to the review as well. I realized after posting the review that it could be a little misleading of my impression of your story.
Hi people! I just started a novel!
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16260333506483405/Coins-In-The-Woods
Hello there,
Just started a novel. I am still trying to get to know the ins and outs, hoping that I would be able to connect with everyone!
My novel title is REVENGE IS THE NEW ACT OF LOVE...
Link: https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16158707406154205?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4309361378
Please show some love!!
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https://www.webnovel.com/book/16235303506388805/The-First-Hero-Origins
Name: The First Hero Origins
Genre: Sci-fi
Status: 11 Chapters (more coming soon)
Publication: At least 2 chapters daily
Synopsis:
Jack Rabbit and Yjoquekart arrived on the planet Earth with two goals: collect 18 bodies to clothe their brethren with human skin and enslave the inhabitants of Earth as the previous conquest was a failure. Not only are they aliens, but they also inherent supernational powers. Can the citizens of Black Pyrite rebel and counter the aliens' attack? Will the military be involved at some point, supporting the protagonists in their fights? No one knows yet. The characters seek out answers and discover the purpose of the mysterious masks that the aliens wear. Why do they conceal their face? Does it give the supernational powers to those aliens? If so, then how can the human inherent such power and become Earth's hero?
Comments, thoughts, reviews, and criticism would be super helpful.
Critical feedback is much appreciated.
ZephyrIsMe
You up for a review swap? :D
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Chitawulf Ok. Send me your link. Here is mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16085497505850005
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ZephyrIsMe
Here's mine! Hope you enjoy!
https://m.webnovel.com/book/16183569505111105
Chitawulf finished reading and reviewing your book.
I feel like reading. Review snaps anybody?
https://m.webnovel.com/book/16235303506388805
Bahtiyor ill do it but iam not an expert writer so i may not give you the feedback you expect
and hers's my book your review and feedback is much appreciated https://www.webnovel.com/book/16129893106084105/Emperor-of-Kings
Lamorakon_G
I've given a review for yours. Just making sure, but you do have the link to mine, right?
Bahtiyor
I'm up for a review swap. Here's mine:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/16000372505632705/A-Psychic's-Scarlet-Dream
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Bahtiyor I would love to.
Just promoting my novel hear pls help me improve by leaving comments. I would greatly appreciate it :) and I’m also looking for book/story recommendation that I could read. Thank you :)
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/16134404405977705?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4309801590
Title: Emperor of Kings
Genre: Fantasy
Tags: Kingdom building, Army building, Overpowered mc, beast companion, no harem
Synopsis:
A mysterious youngster named Don returning to his homeland after many years for revenge against those who harmed him and to keep a promise he made to someone he loved...
What mysterious and powers he holds to change everything this world knows...
This is the story of an Emperor who is going to conquer and rule everything and everyone...
other points
This is my first novel and writing experience so there might many mistakes, and I read in so many websites that an author have to show the readers rather than telling, I'm trying to show but I don't know if it's working without honest reviews and criticisms from readers
it's not the best novel or anything but I'm trying my best and working to improve myself
Emperor of Kings is a kingdom building main focused novel without harem(Sorry harem lovers)
I'm trying to create two parallel stories for mc you'll know when you read
Mc will be op and kind of an Antihero, i won't make him save every peerless beauties and damsel in distress
if you like a decent novel with kingdom building I think you will like my novel
Review swap
Please don't copy-paste or give fake reviews to get your novel a review or rating, ill read your novel fully and give you my honest review and ratings because reading other novels make me a better writer.
I can't give you feedback in the level of an expert what I can is telling you my honest opinion as a reader
If you up to reading my novel fully and give a review go for it but please don't give a fake review or ratings without even reading because I saw some people do that it's better to not read at all than doing that.
Give me your link to the novel, it may take a while but ill read your novel fully and give you my feedback
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16129893106084105/Emperor-of-Kings
Zyanide100 Sorry. I just got this. I'll read your story right now.
hadiah pembacaan jadi ga jelas..
Title: IF I PUT CEO IN THE TITLE, WOULD YOU READ MY WORK? CEO
(NO! This isn't about CEO lol. And I change the title every now and then.)
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Tags: Transmigration, Xianxia, Cultivation, Demons, Gender-Bender, Flashbacks, Mysterious Male Lead, Beast, Romance
Author: Fuku_Fuku
Synopsis:
Live for me, won’t you?
Seven years ago, three out of four nations in a continent were merged into one by the notorious young empress of the east, Mu Feng. She, who conquered the north and south, was then eventually killed by her own familiar whom her heart wholeheartedly trusted.
After roaming the underworld as a lone spirit for seven years, she attempted to transmigrate back to the human realm.
However, an accident happened!!!
Her soul unwittingly possessed the body of Yu Xiao, Crown Prince of the kingdom ruling the west. Where did it go wrong?
What's worse was that the person who killed her- the one she, who was now a 'he', wanted to avoid the most kept on crossing paths with him. But were those encounters really nothing but coincidence?
Bahtiyor
while I'm reading your novel I felt like you are telling me what's happening rather than showing me, I also make this same mistakes I heard from professional authors in Fb group that only through practice and experience we can show more than tell
eg:
Showing: As his mother switched off the light and left the room, Michael tensed. He huddled under the covers, gripped the sheets, and held his breath as the wind brushed past the curtain.
Telling: Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.
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Zyanide100 I'm writing your review right now! Just so you know that I didn't forget about you.
Just made my very first novel, Idk if its good or not :) , Since I'm only writing to enhance my English Skills.
Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/16274171305406805/Daily-System
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Hello, CypherWulf is back and welcome to the Cipher's Log.
Today I shall promote a story I wrote last year. It is my first original novel in this website. It's not that great but I hope you may give it a try. Here it is by the way...
Land Warrior: Greyhounds
The Republic of Easting a small nation in the Continent of Asea faces threats coming from inside out. Foreign or local threats poses dangers to its existence. In order to counter these a rapid modernization effort was done by the government to its military. One of the results of the modernization is the creation of the new Special Forces Unit: The 51st Greyhounds. The unit is the premier rapid reaction elite task force that can be called anytime and anywhere in the country.
Will these efforts be enough to safeguard the country?
https://www.webnovel.com/book/13802069006408505/Land-Warrior
don_offl Looks interesting, I will read and give a review later.