Hi, my nick here is AntikeCoffee.
I'd like to get a real and honest review to my novel. Some of my shortcomings I'm aware, like too many comma tags or slow pacing, but if something else should be urgently improved, tell me please.
The beginning is not the cream of the crop, but it get better. I think my fight scenes are decent, even if few right now
If you could give it a shot, I'd be much obliged.
AntikeCoffee, fellow beginner author