Hi, I'm a novice author currently writing a original Novel. Currently at 43 chapters and 1700 words each.
But as I am sure many know and experienced my novel seems to get just too few readers.

Apart from writing a story I deem alright and interesting, with a steady upload quota and good grammar I can't think of a way to get more people to see it.
This story has maybe been influenced by other stories I've red, but certainly got my personal ideas and values.

This here is an attempt to receive some kind of answer.

Thank you for possible answers and critique

AC

    AntikeCoffee No shameless promoting out of monthly thread. Your thread will not be locked for now as you're asking a question, but your post has been edited & the link deleting. A warning has been given.

      AntikeCoffee I saw some threads where people do review swaps, so you could try doing that and bolster your reviews. More reviews could entice more readers to come and check out your work as if they see a majority of them are positive they may give it a crack. How many views does your novel currently have?

        Suploly views are currently 15k,not sure if that is a lot or not, as I often see how novel with far less chapters got already in the 100k.
        And I don't really trust these review swaps. Often I see how novels got these nothing saying emoticon filled reviews, and something like that I don't want.

        My goal are honest comments, critique from readers that really red it.

          Mostly do review swaps and promote in the designated thread, beyond that suggest the novel and site to your friends and family. Take part in the occasional WPC contests, while you cant use your existing book the winning submission often leads to people checking your other work.

            AntikeCoffee Yes, tbh, review swaps don’t always offer the best feedback. Many become you give me 5, and I’ll give you 5 stars. But if I get 3 or 4, then you get that too. But of course, there are some people that will genuinely read and give decent feedback. So I’d participate in them anyway until you get 10 reviews; in which case, then, you’ll have a rating show up on your novel which can help you garner more readers. Having a rating show up on your novel is more appealing usually than one that doesn’t because it signifies that people have read and given their opinions (even if that’s not true 100% of the time).

            Getting organic reviews is rare/uncommon even for more popular books. So you’re not going to get many without review swaps.

              How to get more views.
              Step 1: Write something you like.
              Step 2: Compare what you write to someone you like that's a writer, and try and get closer to their chapters content.
              Step 3: Repeat for 10,000 hours and 5 million words and keep challenging yourself.
              Step 4: Post and people will hopefully read it because you're now as good as your favorite author.
              Step 5: You'll be their favorite author and they'll keep coming back.
              Step 6: Your views will skyrocket exponentially.
              Step 7: Don't be lazy, why aren't you still practicing how to get better at writing?
              Step 8: You thought 10,000 hours of practice was hard, but what about 100,000 hours?

                Her_Shadow

                Step 3: Repeat for 10,000 hours and 5 million words and keep challenging yourself.
                Step 8: You thought 10,000 hours of practice was hard, but what about 100,000 hours?

                :joy:
                Ah.
                The life of a writer is hard.

                AntikeCoffee
                I am just assuming btw as I don't know what your novel actually is, anyways...

                *Having a cover (I think this was by Wattpad statistics) boosts your valid readers by x20
                -You don't need a cover at the start or whatever, but definately get one in the future. Like I don't have a cover yet, but I'm doing fine, or at least I think, new too WN.

                *Have good title. Best titles are usually two-three words (in my opinion...). Best books would usually have the format too. Only Exceptions are like series, ex) Harry Potter: & the Wizarding Stone, The Hunger Games: Catching Fire, etc. (prob spelled those titles wrong a little).

                *Have good synopsis. Could easily boost your views to make every1 ignore you. It doesn't need to be the best... but at least good enough to convey your book and clickbait.

                Word Count: 1700 is kinda too short (again, my opinion...), at least aim for above 2k. Prologue can be exception. Why? Multiple Reasons. One, it annoys readers. Two, Your story doesn't progress as much and lacks a lot more depth. Three, most popular online novels are at least above 2k in 99+ out of 100 cases. If you wish to have higher quality, aim for 2.8k-4.3k. Mot professionally written, books meant for sales and publishing, are written around that average word count per chapter in fiction stories. If you wish to aim for better quality, aim for higher word count. Why do authors of online novels are 2-3k average generally? It is because it is simply easier to write. Less thought is needed, it is easier, and number one reason is contracts. For example WN contract. If you for some reason decided to sell all your copyright for small* short term benefits, like the majority of authors on WN, then you are pressed for time, as you will literally lose everything if you dont meet your quota. (I think) Authors are required to post daily. So it is easier to post shorter chapters.

                Quality: Just like word count, it is a choice and also somewhat innate. Like writing slower for better quality, or writing faster for lesser quality, writing more words per chapter for better quality, or less for lesser quality. No offense, but since u post daily, and are also new to WN, then your quality is probably not the best. There is a reason why so many stories are good at the start but then quickly go to poo. Another things is grammer, basically your english knowledge. Of course people whose first or major language is English have a huge advantage, same as older people. I say at least like 10th grade plus? Below that would be lacking quality. You also need to edit your chapters. YES it takes fricken more forever than it already is forever, but it is for quality. Do I edit? Sort of... Better authors defiantly do though. For me, I write in google docs, copy & paste to word, fix, copy and paste to WN and give quick scim and fix. If I'm not lazy enough, I would reread to edit. Now you also need to edit on different days. Your mind works differently at different times, you'll definitely catch stuff that you missed. For me, I generally reread random chapters I didn't heavily edit every once in a while to give refresher and edit chapters.

                Plot: Cliche bad. Avoiding cliche somewhat bad. Having too much cliche is horrible, but at times you also need it. It's hard to be original in a world that most likely already has something you just thought of, albeit a different setting. Rookie authors have major problem with plot holes. How to fix? Just think a lot... but honestly you just need to read not just read though, think about stories of the thing you viewed. Movies, games, books, etc. You need to be inspired by something before you write. You also need a basic plot line before you write. For example, MC gets a recall ability in a world with Martial Arts. -> major plot event -> major plot event -> major plot event... things in between are improved and thought up as you go. But you need the big events and know who your MC, ML, FL, Major Enemy, etc. are. Especially the different arcs in your novel

                Characters: Don't make it 2D... please... like every single Isekai... Give it depth. I don't really want to explain this one as its complicated but theres bunch of tutorials, tips, and knowledge out there with just one search.

                Descriptions: You need it, but don't over do it. To make your story vivid it needs good descriptions. Emotion, not stating how she is happy, but the subtle smile on her face, not how it was hot, but how the sweat dripped off your arms, not how the scary the killer was, but the dark aura enclosing on him... I'm getting lazy, so reason I'm typing less...

                Reviews? Don't ask for them, at least in places like forum. Especially review swaps, they are simply fake. They don't help at all, and if you are one of those people, wouldn't be surprised if you are one of those that delete every single negative review. Reviews will come naturally. You can ask your readers periodically, but don't force them. Like just remind them like end of every arc or end of story. At most just ask powerstones. Most reviewers dislike reviewing early on in the story, as most novels true quality can really only be seen around 100-200 chapters as that is where the author's true improv and battle of self emotions start (Lazyness, repetiveness, etc.).

                Release Schedule: You already have one. Unless you want writing to take up the majority of your life and day though, I would suggest slowing it down and boost word count a little. My chapters take about 4-6 hours average for around 3k words that are carefully planned for the plot. Of course there is other stuff as I write, but I am slowing down my writing in order to keep quality and think of the future outline. Also, online novels are essentially different from publishing novels. For example, I am writing two things. One for publish, one for wn. Publishing novel is very, very slow as I am aiming for top quality. Merely writing 250 words could take up an hour. Not to mention that I am editing and rereading over and over unlike online novel. Its really sad. Quality is how much you put into it. Release schedule gains you a more loyal fanbase += more stones and free advertisement.

                Self Bias: Essentially you said that you are very good. However, that is most likely not the case. Knowing one's faults is a thing that most people can't man up to for some reason. Although I don't have this problem, a majority of people do, like 49/50 or 99/100. LIke if you ever played competitive video games, how much times have people pointed out that you suck and why... without them ever looking at themselves?... Now, what about yourself? You need to attack yourself if you every truly want to improve, not to mention improve more quickly.

                Views: Most of those 100k views of new novels you claim are because they are authors with an already established fan base, are Fan Fic, are about a very R18 title-pic-&synopsis, or a winner of a WPC. At least I'm guessing you really mean new novels. Also, lots of novels with shorter chapters than you, are actually older than your novel, at least assuming you posted one a day. Lots of novels on WN are dropped, and for some god **** reason, they won't let you delete novels you dropped. Views take time. Also note that views are actually just people who clicked on your book (taking you the the synopsis with the reviews and stuff). It also does not differentiate between different people. If you clicked on that page 100 times, you just got 100 more views. Valid readers are the real viewers. It is hard to differentiate though... Don't like the system as much... Anyways, you won't magically get best book ever. Biggest jumps in views will be when you are featured in the front page or browse section. Easiest way to get that is contracts.

                Comments: Generally, better chapters would have more comments, sucky/better books have more reviews, but it also depends on genre and flow. If you have a fast paced start, or a super descriptive click bait prologue, than congrats, you just got more comments. You prob need around 1k bookmarks before you start getting comments every chapter, around 100 is periodic comments, though that last part is just a pure guess on what I have right now.

                Inspiration: Drop your dang novel right now if you don't even like writing that story. I remember the first ever book I tried to write was for an dark apocalyptic thing cause there was a money reward. I fricken hated it, and the story was sucky, even though I thought it was good the very first day (because its your work, duh). You need inspiration before you write a novel, and also have a general outline with world background. Read good books that are similar to your novel too. You can see what they did good and what to avoid.

                Other stuff: idk my brain farted, forgot what else there is.

                  AntikeCoffee
                  I gave your novel a short glance, being less direct would probably help (based on synopsis didnt actually read). Also since english isnt your main language, you should just read read read good books more, and also look up videos like LinkedIn Learnimg or Utube, and also search for synonyms as u write, u dont want to be repetitive. Look up grammar too when u think somethings off. Also your synopsis could use work, mines not the best either... but yours felt off to me, no offense. Also review swaps r fake reviews, does u no good other than inflating your ego. Ask for constructive feed backm not review swaps. Also make your title bigger, its way too small. People cant read as they browse past.

                    JKaiya Man, that was intense. You actually wrote that much for a reply. Now I wouldn't doubt that you can write more than 1k for a single chapter. It takes me a whole day to finish a chapter with 500 words avg. That's because I keep re-editing over and over. My trash is filled with scrapped chapters that sometimes took me a week to write. That's why I keep losing people from my fan base who genuinely liked my stories. Even now, I keep receiving a few powerstones despite not posting for a month (I wanna cry because of how touched I am). Now, just because you shared so much good info, I'm gonna go check out your book.

                      Write something good and write it well.
                      Be persistent, consistent with updates, patient and continue to polish that good story.

                      Have fun.
                      Do a lot of market research on your genre and test a few promotional activities (non spam only).
                      Eventually, readers will find you.

                      AntikeCoffee Then write in the topic of shameless advertising “February 2020: Promote Your Novels Here / Review Swap” - I want to get criticism, honest review and honest comments (at the swap level, just comments) and you will get them.

                      6 months later

                      WidelyGrinning i literally just spent around 10 minutes to write a 500 words chapter, i know it's a really short word count but i wanted to daily release. Also I'm starting to feel strange as i don't even take half an hour to publish a chapter.

                        FantasyS I'd this is not the right way to do it, could you do a binge writing session where you write for the majority of the day ? having a head start should give you a lot of comfort

                          4 months later
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