fraftlle well if u r having that problem, then find a novel written in litRPG style like yours and observe the work

    RenuKakkar yeah, I did it.

    And I remember. You didn't reply me when I asked for the link. So don't blame me.

    And u don't need to worry about this stuff.

    With that good of a story and narrating skills. You just need to keep writing

      This is my first Novel I am not sure how to good it is cause I forget what i read about and only remember the feelings the book gives me

      https://www.webnovel.com/book/15712123705714405/The-Blizzard-swordsman

      Wren lives off of his Mother in cold, harsh world were strength and power are paramount

      With problems present in his body he only survives under her protection when she goes missing for 2 years

      His first contact with her in this time is her forcing upon him the new world of the VR game ‘New World’

      Will ‘New World help solve his body problems? Will his Fighting and Tailoring techniques flourish?

        ReincarnatedSaint
        Thanks for the review.

        I had given you the link 3 days ago. Please scroll up. Anyway, it does not matter. Thanks again.

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          Behold my masterpiece, the magnum opus of all things Isekai! Who needs some dumb otaku getting sucked into another world when reading their dose of vitamin light novel trash? I for one do the heck not! Instead of bland NEETS, we need to think...THINK GOOSE! If you are ready for a journey into another world with our snake birb overlord, click here:

          https://www.webnovel.com/book/16607084506671505/Take-a-Gander-at-This!-The-Hero-is-a-Goose%3F

            Hi everyone, first time writer here! I'm not quite sure yet if I'm cut out for it, but if any of you would be kind enough to read it and perhaps comment on it, then I'll be very grateful.

            So far, I only have a few chapters but I think it already create a foundation. Here is the link to my story.

            https://www.webnovel.com/book/15905788706386905/The-Days-When-I%E2%80%99m-With-You

            Title: The Days When I'm With You
            Genre: Contemporary Romance
            Synopsis: Why do we meet if it only ends in goodbye? Why do we fall in love if it only lasts for a while? Tell me, how do you live if it’s only to survive? I once had everything until I have nothing.

            P.S. Since I love reading light novel, I'm also open for review swap!

            Good day! :D

              Kiiara Interested in a review swap? My novel is titled Viper in the Vale. It's an isekai villainess novel.

              To anyone interested, do ping me.

                any swap reviews ping me

                  Mellize let’s do it! I’ll read it after a ten minutes break. I’ve just finished a review lol. Mine is called “The Days When I’m With You”

                  Hi everyone, this is my first novel! If anyone wanted to read it and give it a review, I would love it. Anyway, here is the link to my story.

                  https://www.webnovel.com/book/13824940705480805

                  Title: Son of the Spirit Beast
                  Genre: Xianxia/Xuanhuan
                  Synopsis: Rainbow Island, one of the several islands in this world governed by martial artists, is the stage of an incredible event. A newborn infant, Hei, is saved from a tragic ending and raised by a spirit beast spider. Under these unusual circumstances, Hei ends growing up with the body of a human but the mind of a spirit beast. However, this world is filled with conflicts, and his vision about spirit beast differs by the rest of the world. So, in order to protect his family, he decides to become a martial artist, beginning a journey that would bring him toward the peak of martial artist society while discovering the concealed story of the world.

                    Kiiara yeah sure..will do..my novel "Heavenly Dao emperor"

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                      Title: Sustaining the King's Life
                      Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/14781766305602705/Sustaining-the-King's-Life

                      Synopsis

                      On a secluded mountain situated upon a kingdom known as Feuersturm, resides a seemingly trifling cabin with an unlikely duo as its inhabitant—a witch, and her apprentice who presumably comes from a clan sought after by slave traders. Faustina is a sixteen-year-old girl who fled the slave market with the help of a sickly witch named Eula, who later on trained her as an apprentice for the span of seven years.

                      Plagued with a mysterious disease for several years, Eula died despite the efforts Faustina had exerted to cure her; in her last breath, she left an odd request behind.

                      "Sustain the king's life. This is your duty. Do not adhere to the prophecy."

                      To which the odd plea shadowed a bizarre series of events, a consequential sentence, similar to that of a premonition. The same night the phrase was muttered, the chain of events followed:

                      A warlock's intrusion to their home, with a peculiar yearning to resurrect Eula from the dead...

                      and the king himself, asking for Faustina’s aid.

                      1-2 chapters a day (GMT+8)

                      (The artwork belongs to me. Visit more of STKL artwork on my twitter: @chains_lock)

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