_VA_ I've done it. Sorry, I need times to read that. It was a good story

    dhruvchops
    hello my name is brandon gould i am the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i would be more then happy to review your book if you would review mine, it has been a project i have been working on for the past 8 years and would not mind some feed back

    just so you know i am aware of the grammer and puncuitoon as well as mispelled words.

    i would not mind tips and if you could point out any plot holes or incosenties that would be great

        Helo, newest chapter of my original novel has been released guys! Check it out and give me your thoughts!

        Title: Last Dance

        Latest ch: 8

        Link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/15219500706557005

        "Ding!"

        "Awakening process begins."

        "Preparing objects to be awakened." Suddenly my body lifted up and something like an electric current hit my entire body until I felt like I was electrocuted and stretched my body.

        "What is this, ouch ... I feel like I'm electrocuted, it hurts but doesn't feel at all."

        "My body is shrouded in lightning bolts which are very small and snatched ..."

        "Phase 1: Reconstruction of body tissue."

        "Done!"

        "Phase 2: Reconstruction of the materialization of the body."

        "Done!"

        "Phase 3: Reconstruction of body parts and alignment of elements."

        "Done!"

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