Mandeep_Singh_780
It happens sometimes... There was one such scene in my first work, which literally made me cry as I got immersed in the character. I do feel pity for both the father and daughter pair in it.. But, it can't be of any help I guess

    Mirilidan Hi! I just have a question. The current setting for your story is still in the black eye galaxy, right?

      mrmrcia
      But it won't be today maybe tomorrow.
      Because you have 35 chapters that's really good.
      I'm gonna have to take my time with it.
      But you can expect a review tomorrow

        TheViking5500 No, it's fine. Mirilidan gave the proper link to your book. :) Thank you so much! I will also take my time in reading your book after I'm done with two others.

          Mirilidan
          hi this is brandon gould i am the writter of the Tylingariea Epic i would like to do a Review Swap with you
          https://www.webnovel.com/book/16428504506014305/The-Tylingariea-Epic
          this is my link
          the book is currently in the process of being edited so the version that is on Webnovel is not the final version keep that in mind when you give your review
          i would like any advice that you can give that will help me in my writing and any feedback will be very helpful in the process of editing

            Morag_Xavier
            Hi my name is brandon gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epic i would like to do a review swap with you
            https://www.webnovel.com/book/16428504506014305/The-Tylingariea-Epic
            this is my link my book is a fantasy sci fi book
            the book is currently being edited so the version that is on webnovel is not the final version just keep that in mind when making your review
            i would like any advice you can give that will help with my writing and any feedback will be helpful in the editing process
            my review will be up shortly

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