Joseph_char I have it on my chrome tab open, will go through it today or tomorrow. Will give the first 5 a go, but reading your auxiliary, I might want to give it a try to at least chapter 14-15 till you really start going into the main story, and not just dump info. Anyways I love seeing a fellow author that is doing what he always wanted, writing the story of his dreams. I can appreciate that, I have spent YEARS designing the world where the story takes place in.